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I wanted to escape the palace unnoticed but that was not how it happened.
I walked past the Study where, unfortunately, my sisters had gathered and were gossiping. I suppressed a shriek of anger and quickened my pace, hoping they were too involved in conversation to notice me. But I just managed to catch Clarice, my eldest sister's, eye.
"Oh, Evangeline, there you are, where is the tea I asked you to make?" she asked with a tone of impatience. I stopped in mid-step. I wanted to turn and slap them all, but instead I faced them with an expression of complete calm. Clarice then noticed my luggage. "What are you doing with those?" I had caught my other sisters' attention by now.
They all had condescending looks on their faces. Now was my time to bid them my farewell, not that they deserved it. I smirked. "I, my dear sisters, am leaving." I said sarcastically and boldly. My voice echoed through the Study. They were taken aback, and that's just how I wanted them to be. "Where are you going then? We did not give you permission to leave." Talia, my second eldest sister, asked.
I scoffed. "You do not own me. I am not your possession. So you have no right to tell me if I can leave or not." They look bewildered. During my eighteen years as their slave I had never once spoken up.
"Goodbye sisters..." I boomed, then grimly added "See you all in hell."
They shrieked and gasped and stared open-mouthed while I skipped down the hall, toward my new and happier life with my dearest Damian, all the while laughing with such grand and genuine merriment.
- by Sweet Strawberries Chan |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/12/2009 |
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- Title: Evangeline's Escape
- Artist: Sweet Strawberries Chan
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Description:
This is a story about a princess who's the youngest of three sisters and she hates her life in the palace. This is only a small section of the tale........but tell me what think :)
Helpful criticism is appreciated :)
Enjoy~ - Date: 07/12/2009
- Tags: evangelines escape princess
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Comments (3 Comments)
- tomboyunicorn - 07/20/2009
- oh, and good for you for wanting criticism. I too appreciate remarks for what I'm doing wrong. That way I know how to get better!
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- tomboyunicorn - 07/20/2009
- I enjoyed this quite a bit. I want to be an author when I grow up. I love the vocabulary. I pictured it clearly in my head. Your writing has voice. Good job.
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- BookWurm21 - 07/14/2009
- it's good. u should write more
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