- "Yes. It would be nice to have some help for once," Riley said as he shot a glare at his older brother. "Im Riley and this is my brother Jeff." "Hi, nice to meet you guys. Now if you wanna get that tire changed we should get to work," Janis added. Soon they were up and running. "Thank you soooo much for your help. If you hadn't pulled over," Riley said, "we would have been here for a long time." "No problem," Janis replied, "it's nice to finally be able to help someone for a change." "Is there anyway we can make it up to you?" asked Jeff. "Yes there is. There's a fundraiser that I'm doing for a soup kitchen. There will be an auction and all kinds of games." "Cool, we'll be there" said Jeff. Soon they were watching Janis pull off the side of the road. In seconds they also were submerged in the sea of cars. At the hospital Jeff was given a cast. "Its broken bad," said Dr. Revis, "come back in a month and we'll take a look at it." Then Dr. Revis lent them a hospital wheelchair. "Where do you think dad is? He should have been here hours ago." said Jeff. "I know. It's not like him to be gone from his family so long."
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- | Submitted on 06/30/2009 |
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- Title: Just My Luck Chapter 2
- Artist: _-xXVampirCatXx-_
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- Date: 06/30/2009
- Tags: just luck chapter
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- tara willams - 06/16/2011
- try making a new line when there's dialogue, it makes it easier to read = ) it was good though, i liked it X )
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- _-xXVampirCatXx-_ - 07/03/2009
- Anyone who read my story, please tell me what u think. the more advice the better i can make it.
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