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At the center of oursystem is the molten sun,
A star that burns hot, Fahrenheit two billion and one.
But the sun, He ain't alone in the heavenly sphere,
He got nine homies in the orbit,
Some far, And some near.
Old Mercury's crowding in 'bout as close as he can,
Yo, Merc's a tiny planet who loves a tan.
Venus is next, She's a real hot planet,
Shrounded by clouds hot enough to melt granite.
Earth is the trird planet from the sun just enough heat and light to make the living fun.
Then comes mars a planet funky and red,
Covered with sand the place is pretty dead.
Jupiter's huge! The largest planet of all.
Saturns big too, But Uranus is small.
So far away the place is almost forgotten,
Neptune's view of earth is pretty rotten.
And last but not least pluto's in the fog,
Far away and named after Mickey's home dog.
Yo, Thht's all the planets orbiting o ur sun,
But milky way galaxy is far from done!
- by i_Rawr_Teddi |
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- | Submitted on 06/30/2009 |
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- Title: The Solar System
- Artist: i_Rawr_Teddi
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heh its the only thing i can think of
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The planets r in order v.v - Date: 06/30/2009
- Tags: solar system
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Comments (7 Comments)
- harniey - 04/09/2013
- what a great!!!
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- milkylucas - 08/03/2010
- that was awesome
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- Luka Merai - 01/17/2010
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******** great.
You could rap this to elementary school kids and teach them about the planets. I love it! Very creative, 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Timecraze - 01/09/2010
- poetry section next time! its great! 5/5 rate mine in return please!
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- GeezerNerd - 11/23/2009
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Anonym. is right great, but should be in the poetry section5/5
Read mines and comment please - Report As Spam
- Ninja Napalm - 08/18/2009
- i love it but technically theres ice on mars too not just dust
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- Death_Dealer089 - 08/04/2009
- Haha! This is great. I love it.
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