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I looked into his sparkling eyes as his mouth inched towards mine, slowly. I didn't hesitate. I couldn’t wait any longer. I lunged forward and locked my lips with his. I wrapped my arms around his neck, bringing him closer.
Tighter.
Nearer.
I moaned, bringing one hand to his cheek, curling my fingers over his ear.
He let his hands crawl under my shirt, exploring my lower back as he forced me to come closer to him, yanking me forward. His hands traveled along my back, discovering every bit of my skin. I tugged his hair and made him come closer. Moaning, he securely locked his arms around my lower back, letting his fingers glide along my hips.
It was Heaven on Earth, and I thanked God that Heaven lasted forever.
He let out a second moan. This time it was louder.
Shakier.
Greedier.
He pulled me so close that there was no space between us. Our bodies were squeezed up against one another’s, killing any air in between.
I poked my tongue into his mouth, not having any forced intention. Soon, he poked his back in return, tickling my tongue; traveling around my mouth. His hands came out from underneath my shirt and to my face, pulling out of our kiss. He chuckled and pressed his forehead against mine, not wanting to let any air in-between us.
"You never give up, do you?"
I searched his eyes, tracing his every outline. I was mesmerized. His head came down to my neck, breathing his calming, warm breath onto my skin, making me shiver.
"Cold?" He questioned. He pressed his lips against my shoulder, slowly inching his way up to my neck. Reaching my jaw bone, he flexed his mouth around it which sent another shiver down, down, down. He fixed his hands upon my hips, then rested them on my shoulders, then fastened them around my waist.
I had been holding my breath the whole entire time, afraid that if I inhaled, this moment would end.
I shivered once more; making him laugh.
"It's not so cold tonight. Maybe you need some sleep." He enclosed his arms around waist, and then picked me up in his arms, carrying me to his bed. He gently put me down on the center of the bed and I lay back, feeling the softness of the pillow.
He came around the other side and placed his head on the same pillow. He looked at me, smiling.
Tugging the sheets up, he gave us both warmth.
Sliding his hand around my waist, coming as close as he possibly could, he sighed.
"Sweet dreams, love."
I snuggled my head up against his chest, closing my eyes; secretly crying.
- by lillilypop |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/22/2009 |
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- Title: Greedy For Love.
- Artist: lillilypop
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Description:
inspired by greantee's style of writing
edit - thanks for the awesommeee ratings, but feebaq would be cool, too!! - Date: 06/22/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- lillilypop - 07/22/2009
- thanks
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- X1993 - 07/01/2009
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Very sensual. The writing style is good. Choppy sentences need some work though. A new list of adjectives would be good. This piece is only a few well placed adjectives away from being a great piece. Well a little more than that, but you get the idea. Very close. I would like to see you expand on your work, maybe make this into some kind of story. I know I am getting ideas.
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- HeraWolf - 07/01/2009
- I love it! It's great! 5/5
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- neongreenivan - 06/24/2009
- woot, serenitys got someone to inspire
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