- you awaken. you feel a strong hold on your neck. you hear water below. you open your eyes as looking down. you see nothing but pitch black. you look up. you see a rope that must have hung you, and a dim light. someone must have hung you. you try to remember why you were hung but cant even remember your own name. the light is blocked by a young girl. she has a look of fear in her eyes. she falls in. as she falls into the water, you see a gaping bloody hole in her back between her wings. you fill with anger from this murder. something begins pulling you up by the rope. you cut your finger on a knife in your pocket. you grip the knife filled with anger.whoever, or whatever killed this innocent girl is about to pay.
- by explosivblade |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/17/2009 |
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- Title: exerpt from deception, by me.
- Artist: explosivblade
- Description: im writing a book. here is the beggining. no it probly wont be published. tell me what you think of my second-person style of writing! if you dislike it and have advice lay it on me. (p.s. if it does ever get published, i will make it first person as to not have girls saying its about a lesbien, cuz later there will be a little bit of having a crush. im actually using people i know! i ask their permission first of course.
- Date: 06/17/2009
- Tags: exerpt from deception
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Comments (2 Comments)
- brokenchik7 - 12/21/2009
- Very good.
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- littles-meow77 - 06/18/2009
- AH-HAHA!!! YAY!!! I love revenge!!!
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