I'm sorry

• Artist: kawaii-neko-chan-nya
• Description: this is basiclly apologizing for things i felt like i needed 2...i had nothing else 2 do, so i wrote this yesterday after my laptop got taken away.
• Date: 05/25/2009
• Tags: sorry

I'm sorry
I'm sorry for the damage I've caused
I'm sorry for the relationships I've ruined
I didn't mean to
I'm sorry I'm a b***h
I'm sorry that I'm jealous
I'm sorry for my attitude
I'm sorry for my presence
I'm sorry you met me
I'm sorry tht im depressing
im sorry for making u worry
im sorry i cnt go bck in time
for if i could u'd b happier not knowing me
i apologize for i talk the way i do
im sry im so stubborn
im sorry u think i intentionally ruin ur relationships
i swear to god i dnt mean to
im sorry for always putting myself down
your too nice 2 me
and i dnt deserve it
you always help me wen u should jst 4get me
im sry for everything ive done and caused
i wish u nvr met me
thats wat im most sry for
if u nvr met me
u'd be fine
u'd have a much better life
ur relationships would be bettr
and u wouldnt have 2 wry bout me
but i cnt make that happen
and im sry

Comments

[Candle Shadows]

The text talk ruined it for me. I couldn't even finish

[Sullen blue_death]

i agree with lace ribbon, and your Grammar is atrocious :/

[BroodyElves]

I don't see this as literature. The text speak, random lack of capitals and punctuation (or at least commas to indicate you're going onto the next line) really lets you down, and it just doesn't mean anything to me at all. I think you could improve by just using proper grammar, and if you're going to repeat "I'm sorry", do it consistently and/or at regular intervals if this is a poem format. Maybe try adding in some imagery or so

[Wind-Blown Dandilion]

Its lovely smile

[Elventin]

think this is relly good

[Tomato Top]

really, i could careless... if you want to apologise to someone, apologise to the people who read this. if i could vote, it would be a 1/5.