- It all happened so fast. One minute, I was lazily drifting through Altes Tier, the biggest port town in all of Central, and the next I heard screams and enormous waves. Something giant was surfacing. I was a bit more than half a mile away, but from where I stood I could see it. It was colossal, but it wasnt the size that was astonishing. I was surprised because it was a bear. Standing at what must have been 3 miles high considering the oceans bottom, it was a Grizzly bear, wearing a toga of other animal skins. It had the body of a human, except one arm was was of some kind of brass material, it looked like. It gets worse though. For one, it had no pupils. The unnerving look made it seem even scarier. And the worst part of it all, was that the rainbow like aurora it released from its jaws wasnt a pretty rainbow at all, no, it destroyed half of the town. Well, that was it. It had killed maybe... 70 people. Time to stand up and fight.
- Title: Ursa Major
- Artist: Arikara
- Description: Just a story idea I thought of as a god awaking from all the pollution and putting an end to it.
- Date: 05/05/2009
- Tags: ursa major
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Comments (2 Comments)
- bindyblueeyes - 05/18/2009
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it sounds okay but i don't think this should just be about it ending pollution and your writting seems choppy but that may just be because this is just an idea
but this could turn into a good story - Report As Spam
- x-Bright MoonLight-x - 05/14/2009
- it sounds good, i would read it.
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