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IReku wock up in the snow his head throbing. His past came flooding bake to him"Boy put down that stuped sword and help your old man fish!" "Fishing naver helped if attacked." "Ha! Ha!! Ha!!! No fishing helped you eat and
Buy that sword. Now fish!" ...his head still heart but rembered his Dad.
"The a** he was. I...am a samurai." Oh my head. Reku passed
out. "This is him the boy I'm looking for."
Reku wock up in a house he could smell something good. "Hi your awack
ready to eat?" "Is that you...?" "Yes its me May rember your friend. From
school!thens when I remembered... A boy running after a girl thay both had sticks and were play fighting and then the school bell sounded... "Yes I rember you.now what to eat?" "Thats allways like you pass out in a fight wack up and be ready to eat." "Rereku what happend why do I have a hard time remembering? stuff?" "Dont know I havent saw you in years. Just today I find you passed out in the snow when fighting a demon in the wods." "Has it been that long?" The door opend a man walked in.
"Help our town is under attack!" When Reku and May got to the town Samuria were fighting of the wolf spirts.
Reku took out his sword cutting a wolf down from is jump through the air.
"Still know how to use a sword." "Thats something I will naver forget."
- Title: Soul cry CHAPTER 1
- Artist: Rerekuso
- Description: A young man becomeing a Samurai but to do so he must find out about his dark past.
- Date: 04/14/2009
- Tags: soulcry
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Rerekuso - 10/30/2010
- I fixed it it was a long time ago when I wrote it.It should be better now.
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- Live Sideways - 10/29/2009
- It's like you typed this in the dark... blindfolded... and then blindly submitted it. I'm sure the ideas are good, if I could actually understand them.
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- Dovewing11 - 09/03/2009
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I really dont know anyone who could spell worse....
i know a lot of peeps... - Report As Spam
- zeroling - 07/22/2009
- hmmm good storyline. um not so good on how u wrote it tho. way too many spelling error and bad grammer, fix that then it'll be good.
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- Onyxbutterfly - 07/22/2009
- Spell check please!
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- Denial Of Love - 04/28/2009
- Dude, make friends with a dictionary, or better yet, spell check -.-
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