- Once upon a time there was a young girl by the name of Suzaki. She loved the world around her, yet, her world was not complete. She wanted everything to be perfect. For some reason, everything around her seemed to go wrong. She would always escape her home and run into the Feild of Tall Grass next to her house. There she met a boy. Not just a boy, a boy with black wings. She vowed to protect him and keep him healthy. But, when the boy was no where to be seen, she looked everywhere. The search is on to find the boy. The next night, Suzaki left her house to find the boy. Her parents didn't know about this and when they saw that she left in the middle of the night they paniced. They searched the whole town but, she wasn't there. Suzaki was actually in the next town over. "I don't know where he is and I don't know how long this trip is. But, I promised that I would take care of him. I promise I will find you. Whatever it takes." Suzaki thought to herself as she looked back at her town from the mountain on which she was standing. Suzaki started down the mountain and forward onto her journey to find the boy. In her upcoming journeys she would face life and death, the only thing making her to keep going forward and to find the person she wants to see.
- by kahaki kiari |
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- | Submitted on 03/28/2009 |
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- Title: Time goddess part 1
- Artist: kahaki kiari
- Description: This is about a girl's life who is troubled when everything goes wrong. She meets a boy and vows to protect and take care of him. It turns out that the boy was the God of Time, Kronos. He disappeared one day and the girl sets out to find him. When she finds him they fall in love and the girl becomes the time goddess. I don't care what you say, this is not like Twilight at all. There are no vampires. And the boy falls in love with the girl.
- Date: 03/28/2009
- Tags: time goddess part
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Comments (3 Comments)
- this username is invalid - 01/10/2010
- It's so short. It doesn't build up suspense. Maybe adding dialogue would help. And I find it strange that she just finds Kronos in a field and vows to take care of him. Us readers don't know what's wrong with him. Keep working on it.
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- gabbwee2 - 06/25/2009
- It needs to be more descriptive, it is kind of boring, tho if u keep working on it it might get better
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- iPuRpLeDiNo RAWR - 03/28/2009
- awesomeness XD i like it...thats cool
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