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For a moment I felt a cold wind
Not knowing what it was
I stepped forward
and opened my eyes
and there it was
the entrance to hell
There was a huge iron door
with the word "Destiny" inscripted in it
The door creeked opened
and flames bursted out
This is an awful place.
I did not wanted to go in
but I wanted to see
how hell,it would be
during my eternal sleep
I slowly walked inside
The skies were black and flames were all over
I could hear the ecos of screams and plees.
I could hear my name blow with the wind
It was a sea of miseries
I ran across that terrible sight
To the sunless horizon
When I got there...
I couldn't believe my eyes
Demons and souls all over the place
Needing help but no one to ask
Spirits and gouls
Goblins and vampires
gargulas and monsters
Halloween,it would seem
One demon came across me.
He was holding a severed human head.
Behind that demon,walked a headless body
It wasn't surprising
The human who owned that head
must've probably sold his soul to that demon
I kept on walking
not knowing the danger that lied ahead
And suddenly I wondered...
"Where is Satan?"
Where is he in all this?
A tick fog covered my feet
It was getting cold...
Hell may be fire and flame...
But it's also a place filled with cold hearts
I felt a light spark of chill in my chest
My sins weren't overlooked in this kind of place
This boy aproached me
He had the apearance of a fourteen year old
His skin was pale and he had no clothes
He had black straight hair
His eyes had a thick black line around them
as if he hadn't slept in ages
He was fairly tall but his back was curved
so it seemed he was looking up at me
He stared at me with his big black eyes.
"Give me a soul..." He said.
"Give me a heart..." He said.
"Give me freedom..." He said.
He then fell on his knees and grabbed my legs and hugged them.
His touch was cold as if he had been in airconditioner all of this time
"PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!"
The only thing I could do was cry.
One of my tears fell on his shoulder and a spot on his skin got color.
I kneeled down to his height and cried
My tears fell on him and his skin got color
The black lines under his eyes disapeared
He stood up and so did I
He wiped away the tears from my face and hugged me
His touch was now warm
God,bless that child
"Thank you very much" He whispered.
His skin began to glow and so did his eyes
He was fading away
It seems as if he was in hell by mistake
As if he was forced to go to hell
and lost his heart and soul in the making
I was glad to return him freedom...
just as he deserved
This small incident called the attention
and many people who had sold there souls to a demon
were gathering around me
All of them pleeing my name for salvation
They all stretched there hands towards me
I was getting scared
When this man came across me
and repreheands them from there madness
All of them fled at her sight
He turned around to face me
"Forgive the incomvenience"
I did not respond
"Come with me..."
I fallowed him to where ever he was taking me
This was an awful place
I was walking behind him
He wore a white suit
His hair was black and he had a tired look
His nails were black
and he had a deep voice
He had the apearance of a forty year old man
but we all know that things in hell are older then what they seem
Minutes later I was standing before an empty throne
No one was around except the man and me
That man sat on the throne
Some dark angels brought,what it seemed,a crystal bottle filled with blood
A crystal cup was placed before him and they poured the blood into it.
He slowly drank the blood
When he finished,he looked at me with his tired eyes
"Welcome,my dear" He said with his deep voice
"I've been expecting you..."
"Me?" I asked.He gave an evil grin
"Yes you..." I got scared
"Do you know God?" He asked me
"Yes..."
"He's a terrible guy,isn't he?Putting laws and stuff...Pfft!"
"Laws are for a good cause" I replied
"But without them life is sweeter...I hate laws.That's why I don't have them"
"..."
"Why don't you stay here a little longer?"
"Longer?" I asked
"I don't know,like...a long eternity"
"...NEVER!!!" Lucifer got mad. "I live for God.And you and your sick lies won't change anything!!!"
I ran out of room and out of the castle.
I ran and I ran
I wasn't getting anywhere
When I got tired
I fell on my knees
I began to cry
and regret the me coming here
Suddenly,I felt a warm touch on my shoulder
I looked up and saw the boy I had helped before
"I came back for you..." He pulled my hand.
A hole opened up in that black sky
and light came in
We drifted away into the light
When I opened my eyes
It hurt.It was too bright
but when my eyes got used to the light
I saw a golden door
with the words "True Destiny" inscripted
The gate opened up.
"I want to show you what I've seen so far"
"Wait,why did you come back?" I asked
"You saved me...I know how hell is.I've been there for six centuries."
When I stepped inside,some angels poured warm water on me.
Washing my sins away.
It seemed as a neighborhood.
There were children playing
infront of the golden mansions.
The bushes there were decorated with runes and diamonds.
The sun was shining bright
and there was a smile in every face.
We walked down the path and saw
a tall looking man sitting in a hill
telling stories to young children
I came close to this man and he smiled at me.
"Hello." He said with a kind voice.
"Hello."
"I'm Jesus.I've been expecting your arrival."
I said nothing because
what was there to say?
I was there before I knew it
and only God knows why.
- by Fantastic Nightmares |
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- | Submitted on 03/23/2009 |
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- Title: Hell
- Artist: Fantastic Nightmares
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- Date: 03/23/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Brainship - 07/21/2017
- impressive
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- danger_addict - 08/01/2009
- nice
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- Usael - 07/12/2009
- that was awesome!
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- MangoXVader - 06/05/2009
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Wow, I loved it.
At first when wrote about the empty throne, I thought that Lucifer was giving it over.... - Report As Spam
- II Tea-Usagi II - 05/30/2009
- i like your fantasy :33
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- myxoma virus - 05/19/2009
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there I was confused and wondering of how I came to die
for if I was dead how and why did I die? - Report As Spam
- Pandora89 - 03/26/2009
- wow! I liked it a lot. Very good job with the storyline. It had a moral too! Keep up the good work.
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