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It was just another stormy day walking home from school with my only and best friend Emily. “My dad is probably getting drunk again” said Emily really sad and embarrassed. “Well my parents are visiting my grandma in the hospital. She’s dying,” I said. “Oh I’m sorry” Emily mumbled. “Maybe you could come over”, I said. Emily looked over still crying about the people who made fun of her because her dad was always drunk. “Ok” she said hopefully. We walked over to my house and went to my room and listened to music for a while.
“Someone’s at the door” said Emily, my best friend. I was surprised people hate me all except Emily. I ran down stairs and answered it and this dark spirit that looked like scream but was all blood stood there it looked fierce and ready to kill. I was horrified but I asked him what he needed. He handed me a knife and told me told me to stab Emily and then myself or I will go to hell and be in pain in misery forever. I took the knife and got Emily to come with me to the lake near the park. The whole time on the walk there I was scared and sad but Emily didn’t Notice.
It was dark and I grabbed her throat and slammed her down and took my knife and stabbed her straight through the heart five times and she stopped screaming and was silent. I tossed her body in the lake reflecting the moonlight. I looked at my hand covered in blood and started to cry really hard. I then took the knife closed my eyes and stabbed myself in the heart. I gasped around for breath and tried to cover up the unbearable pain. My blood was streaming across the grass. I looked around as everything began to fade. I couldn’t believe this pain was real I never thought this moment would come. I became calmer by the moment and closed my sobbing eyes.
I woke up outside heaven’s doors and tried to open then and started banging on them, they wouldn’t open, and then everything faded again. But I started to become horrified. I opened my eyes and was alive again, slowly dying alone. I tried to reach for the knife covered in blood and stabbed myself again. This time it was quick and I watched everything I loved fade away in a flash.
I was in a dark place and it was somewhat foggy. As I pushed my way through the dark mysterious place I was in I heard a loud deep voice. It was calling my name as I lied down and tried to wake up alive again, but a dark figure came trod me. I was scared and started crying harder than I ever did. Satan grabbed my wrist and dragged me to a pool of blood that looked a lot like the lake I killed Emily buy. I started begging for him to leave but he wouldn’t leave.
I could see my dead body lying covered in blood still breathing. All the sudden I woke up again in my body screaming I was alive again but I could still see Satan! I tryed as hard as i could to crawl away but Satan walked towered me smiling evilly. He began to tear off my skin and ripped apart my bones and just tarred me to pieces. I was screaming in a large amount of pain as I slowly felt everything tearing away from me. I could not stand the pain it stung and I was drenched in tears. He tore my eyes out and shoved then down my torn up throat as I was choking. I was beyond horrified and miserable.
I was confused but then I died finally. My soul rose from my body and I was set to wonder this lonely and unforgiving world. It was dark and barren but I saw people I love crying about my death. I tried so hard to talk to them and tell them I loved them, but they could hear me screaming there name. I was lonely and I knew I was going to be stuck here for eternity. I sat by a tree and blood was dripping down the empty holes where my eyes where. It was silent….. And grew even more silent…. Then I saw the demonic spirit rising up. Blood dripping down oh my hands….. There was a bright light….. And then nothing.
- by XX_stab_wounds_XX |
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- | Submitted on 03/19/2009 |
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- Title: death
- Artist: XX_stab_wounds_XX
- Description: i got bored in GSP and wrote this it really sucks because i am only 11 and it didnt take me long to write it
- Date: 03/19/2009
- Tags: death
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