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"Stab me, i dare you!" Tayla screamed. She was lying on the ground with a bruised arm and bloody nose. She and her brother had gotten in a fight and now he was holding his new pocket knife over her head. She stole a glance around, no one was there. They were in the parking lot at the grocery store which had closed for the night. "Maybe i don't want to," Caleb replied. He was angry for having to walk with his sister home instead of going to his friends house. He was starting to feel a little spooky because he remembered what his grandpa had said, "Don't do anything stupid boy, I used to fight with my sister a lot and look where it got me. Fifteen years of jail for murder." He had told grandpa that he was above that but was he? "Bak bak chicken!" His sister screeched. That sent him over the edge and stabbed her. As she screamed he ran for his life and knew there was no turning back now.
They found her lying with a pocket knife sticking out of her. She died with a look of disbelief on her face. her brother had also just disapeared. THey recognized the knife that had Calebs initials on it.
They never found what happened that night or what happened to Caleb. They figured he stabbed her, got scared and ran. In the meantime, three similar murders happened within the area all in which the victims were 12 to 15 years old and had been stabbed with a pocketknife with the initials C.D. Though they never found the murderer, these crimes eventually slowed and finally came to a halt.
13 years later.........
Taylor grabbed her pack after school and ran home. she was thinking about tonight. She had her pocketknife in her pack along with some other things she needed. She was meeting him in the old grocery store parking lot at 10 p.m.
9:55 pm
He was waiting. He hated it here. It brought back old memories but there was nowhere else he could go if he didn't want to be turned in for those murders. Then he heard a loud "CRACK" of a branch and whipped around to come face to face with a girl who looked like his sister the night she was killed. She even had the same clothes on with the dryed bloodstains and hole. "So, you recognize me. I am not tayla, I am Taylor. Tayla was my mom. About 10 montgs before she died she met him in a bar that she had snuck into to get her dad. He bought her a couple drinks and she got drunk. According to grandma she loved me and bought me beautiful toys. THats why when she got failing grades she wasn't punished. So when she died, I was orphaned cause i dont know who my father was. So I am here to show you what it's like.....to die!" she hissed the last two words. She knocked him over and then stabbed him. She laughed evily. Little did she know.....He had a one month old son himself whom she just orphaned.......
- by abickler14 |
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- | Submitted on 03/12/2009 |
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- Title: Stab me
- Artist: abickler14
- Description: Taylor gets killed by her brother and little does he know that 13 years later there's a bloodthirsty killer waiting for him..............and she's not going to stop until she gets revenge!
- Date: 03/12/2009
- Tags: toast404 fiction revenge killers
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- Cl3v3rRey - 04/21/2009
- WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!
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- Lindsey B3 - 03/19/2009
- verry nice
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- xxSora1144 - 03/17/2009
- this is good! whee
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