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Angel a 20 year old blonde Louisiana girl moved to New York to see the snow.Her mom told her to go to a smaller place,but she told her mom her friend Brittney was going to New York.Her mom allowed her still having doubts about.Angel and Brittney took a plane to New York.Now Brittney was a brunnett girl around the same age of Angel.Brittney on the other hand was from Virginia she knew how to have a good time,but Angel was a shy Sunday School girl.When they arrived in New York Angel slowly got off the plane,while Brittney ran down the stair"lets go!"Criend Brittney,but Angel still took her time.They stayed in a hotel for days.Angel got a job as a vet,but Brittney blew all the money at clubs.One day Angel and Brittney were going to a club and angel was pushed by a young man.Angel went flying into the street ,but hurried back to the side walk.Then the young mand flung brittney into the street"hey what was that for..."Brittney never finished the sentence.she was struck by an on comming bus.After 4 years Angel never knew why the man pushed her or her friend ,but Angel never left Louisiana again.As for the young man he was arrested and put in jail for life.
- by Trevor McClain |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/23/2009 |
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- Title: Tragidy
- Artist: Trevor McClain
- Description: my fictional story
- Date: 02/23/2009
- Tags: tragidy
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Little Milkflower - 02/03/2010
- Uh....... No comment.
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- Zweit - 02/24/2009
- Spell out numbers rather then punch them in. Also, a new paragraph is made every time a new person speaks. Format it instead of it just being a chunk of text.
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- Skadi Sundermount - 02/23/2009
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You spelled Tragedy wrong
also, try to indent you sentances.
Like this...
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