• Fang Diachi, a male with light brown skin, long black hair, and full black clothing, walked along the green grasses in the open field, each blade of grass blowing the opposite direction due to the powerful winds, followed by one hundred men of great power and strength behind him. These men were known as blood warriors whom Fang had trained himself. He knew he probably did not need this many, but was prepared, for he did not know how many enemies he would be facing. Fang weilded a powerful sword of fire in his possesion, which was given to him by his father just before he died. The sword was not actually caught on fire, but simply red as the flames of the hells, and upon cutting an enemy burns them as if they were in the depths of Hades themselves. The Blood Warriors were in scarlet red armor, each one weilding bows of mithril make, and a case full of thirty adamentite arrows straped to each of their backs.


    Fang and the Blood Warriors came upon a small marketplace where they saw whom they had come to find. A small group of men and women casually talking and training with their weapons. There was Mooyan, a brown haired citizen, wearing bear skin clothing all the way down, and his love, Lunar. Lunar was a blonde, long haired woman who wore clothing of green. Also there was Lunar's sister, Adelana, a girl with long black hair, wearing solid black, and her love, Edean, a black haired male who wore a dark blue shirt, and black pants. Lastly in the group was Andreal, a black long haired male, wearing purple, as his fruity self normally would. Fang and the Blood Warriors began to approach, and the group began to stare at them...

    Adelana looked Fang dead in the eyes... as he did her as well. Fang whispered silently to the Bloods, "that is her... Adelana. Thats the girl we came for" and with that the warriors quickly surrounded the entire group, each pulling out their bows, loading them with an arrow, and pointing them at one of the enemies in the group. Fang walked in the center of the circle of men and ordered them,, "Take everyone into capture but the girl, Adelana and the male, Edean."

    Fang could hear Edean talking to Adelana whispering to her, "What is going on?" She replied simply and lying, "I have no clue..." She really knew everything however... she knew why Fang was here. Hearing her say this, Fang walked in front of her and looked around, everyone else was being held hostage by the Blood Warriors. They couldn't interfere with his battle now!

    Fang looked at Adelana, and gave her a hellish look. As if all he wanted was her to be dead. He closed his eyes. "What do you want!" he could hear Edean yelling, but simply ignored him and rushed forward at Adelana with his great speed. Edean rushed to stop him, but before he could get to Adelana, Fang had pinned her down to the ground with his sword to her neck. Edean stopped, "Who are you! What are you doing here?" He simply replied, "I am Fang Diachi..."

    At the sound of his name the entire group gasped! Lunar, Adelana, Mooyan, and Andreal... they had all been there to train Fang when he was but very weak. Edean, before this day Fang had never met... but Edean had heard much of him and how he had dissapeared suddenly. Fang had also heard much of Edean and his relationship with Adelana. Andreal attempted to push forward, but was held back by a Blood. He called out, "Fang! What are you doing!" Edean yelled out as well, "Fang! Let her go now!" Mooyan simply looked at Lunar, who was quiet... Lunar knew why Fang was doing this... she knew everything, and even though Adelana was her sister... she would not interfere. This was his battle. Lunar never interfered with anything, she let whatever was to be, be.

    Fang looked down at Adelana who was quiet as well. She knew why Fang was here but would not say a word. She did not want Edean to find out the truth. Edean called out once more, pulling out his bow of iron, and an arrow of silver, "Let her go Fang! I dont want to hurt you!" He simply laughed as all his guards bows suddenly turned to face Edean. "Put your bow down... or you, and her will die." Fang called out. Edean looked around, and slowly... very slowly... put his bow away. He mumbled so softly Fang could barely hear him, tears in his eyes, "why are you doing this..."

    "Shes not who you think she is Edean..." Fang said softly. Edean just gave him a confused and sad look... as if ready to commit suicide, "What do you mean..." Fang sighed... he knew this was going to hurt him... but the truth had to be told about Adelana.

    "Adelana has told you how much she loves you am I correct Edean?" He simply nodded yes. "Shes told you how she wants to be with you forever... shes told you how she will never leave you and how much you mean to her? How through even death she will be by your side..." he simply nodded again. "Are you aware that she began to "love" you only days after she left me... are you aware that she had told the same things to me. How she "loved" me so..." Edeans face went pale...

    Fang continued, as his voice went from calm, to medium, into a screaming tone, looking her straight into the eyes... "She promised me the world... she gave me something when I had nothing! She gave me hope, she gave me love, and she had my full heart... my trust. Someone who was broken beyond repair, she had fixed... someone who was sick of this whole world and ready to commit suicide she gave a perfect life! She made my life worth living! Then she just left me one day like I was nothing! Everything she had said before was all lies! She left me for you Edean! Fang looked up into Edean's face, his eyes filled with hate, "She left me for you! She broke me worse than I have ever been before... and I CAN NEVER FORGIVE HER FOR IT!!!"

    Mooyan, Andreal, and Edean's faces were about to tear up... Lunar's face remained calm... she knew better than most how much it had affected Fang. She knew the pain he was going through. "Is this true..." Edean, with a soft confused voice asked Adelana. She yelled out at the top of her lungs, "NO! Its lies! Please! You know me better than that Edean! You know I wouldn't do something like that!" Edean looked over at Fang. He could tell by the look of Edean's eyes he still wasn't certain of what was true and what was lies. But he was going to believe the girl he loved before some crazy man who randomly comes up and attacks them... "Let her go Fang... you liar!"

    Tears began to flow from Fang's eyes. "If you don't believe me... ask her sister Lunar. She knows better than anyone what happened... Shes seen it first-hand... my pain, my rage, my sorrow... she knows all the things Adelana has said to me... she will tell you whether it is true or not." Mooyan, Andreal, Adelana, and Edean all looked at Lunar who was silent... She tilted her head down, facing the ground. "Is it true Lunar?" Edean asked softly. She did not respond or move. "I SAID IS IT TRUE LUNAR!" Edean yelled with desperation. Lunar looked up at him, "I do not want to get involved in this!"

    Fang looked over at Lunar. "Lunar... just answer one question. Just answer... is what I said about Adelana... all shes said and done... is it true? Please Lunar! Please i'm begging you as a friend. Im begging you!" Lunar was once more silent. After about ten seconds Lunar looked Edean in the eyes... "Y...yes its true." Edean looked over at Adelana, his eyes filled with anger... "You lied to me! I can't believe you lied to me!" Adelana attempted to fight Fang off but her efforts were useless with his sword to her neck, "No I didn't! I love you Edean! I love you I swear!" Edean yelled back, "Bull you wench don't lie to me!" Edean's eyes teared up as he slowly backed away towards the others. "As much as I would like to kill you myself right now, I believe Fang has the biggest quarrel with you... so I will allow him to decide your fate! He's the one who was broken because of you! Now i'm leaving it to him to break you the same!" Edean had to fight himself from rushing forward and killing her on the spot. He kept himself pushed back, under control... but he continually wondered... could Fang do the same? Would Fang do the same?

    Fang looked over at Edean whos eyes filled with rage and hate from Hell itself as were Fang's own, as Edean continued staring straight at Adelana, who was still attempting to fight Fang off and nodded. Then looking down at Adelana Fang growled and released her from the grip of his sword, "I won't kill you without a fair fight..." Adelana looked at Fang with hate but he already had decided how he was going to end this battle...

    Fang ordered the Blood Warriors to release everyone. Lunar, Mooyan, and Andreal. They did so, and the others did not interfere but simply stood there to watch what would happen next. They all understood Fang's position... they all understood... this was his battle. They would not interfere.

    Thoughts passed through Fang's mind faster than words as he began to think about all he and Adelana shared together in the past... about everything they had been given... about how all of it was destroyed...

    Fang thought to himself...

    Adelana and I... sitting on the beach... by the castles... telling each other nothing would tear us apart!
    Adelana and I... kissing and cuddling in the sunsets, saying how we made each others lives worth living!
    Adelana and I... telling each other how NOTHING would tear us apart... and how we would be there through both, good and bad
    The ring I gave Adelana... when we were engaged...
    Holding her when she was cold and scared... and making her warm again, even though it made me cold in the process.
    Always being there when she needed me...
    Her always there when I needed her...
    Training together...
    Learning together...
    Telling her she was perfect...
    Her telling me I was perfect...
    Life being perfect... with her there by my side!

    Putting so much trust in her... so much faith that nothing would ever split us apart!

    It was madening thinking of how much he had trusted her! He continued thinking, How could I have been so stupid! How I could have not seen what she was trying to do!
    He felt so blind! So ignorant!

    Rage filled Fang's heart as Adelana pulled out a Dragon Skin long-bow of her own, and loaded it with a posion-tipped, glass arrow. Fang's eyes went from a dark shade of brown to solid black... the eye, the pupil, the retinas... everything nothing but a black void of hate and rage! Suddenly as he yelled, with a blast of hellish, satanic, screaming it happened... his full rage was unlocked! Every ounce of humanity he had left seemed to dissapear in that instant! The demon he had held inside for so long was unleashed at last!

    The ground underneath everyone began to shake with the new, hellish power that seemed to come upon Fang! Rock began to crumble underneath everyones feet as earth began to rise high into the air! The Blood Warriors began to scatter and run as some were launched into the air by the earth being risen above! Fang's eyes were still so black nothing could be seen in them but hate and the want to kill!

    Suddenly the earth underneath Fang and Adelana rose high into the air! The earth underneath the group of people, Lunar, Mooyan, Andreal, and Edean rose above as well! The ground under everyone cracked and was destroyed until nothing remained but lava below!!!



    Fang was still screaming and the rock he was standing on began to crumble as if it was going to break any second! Lunar yelled out to him, "Fang! Calm down! Please! Before you kill us all!" Edean called out, "Man I understand how you feel! But please!" Mooyan just remained quiet and Andreal yelled out at him, "Its okay! Just calm down!!!!!"

    Fang did not... Fang would not calm down! His rage was going to be shown right here! ONCE AND FOR ALL! All the hate he harnested so long in his heart! All the pain she caused him! Everything was going to be let out right here! If it meant his own life! If it meant Adelana's life! If it meant anyones life, he was not holding it in any longer! He didn't care anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! His heart was free! He didn't care what anyone thought of him! He didn't care about his imperfections! All he cared about was letting out everything that was bottled inside!!!!!

    The earth on which Fang and Adelana stood, and the earth on which the others stood both began to crack as Fang let the rage go suddenly... lava began spewing into the air at alarming rates, the sky had become filled with clouds of blood red coloring! Lighting began striking all around everyone and they all were filled with horrid fear!

    Adelana shot a poisionous, glass arrow at Fang but it missed and flew into the lava! He still stood screaming and unfazed, the rocks cracking more and more! It was almost certain they were all going to die! He couldn't even control himself anymore! The rage was too much! The pain! He didn't care! He was letting it out! He didn't care what damage it did, who died, who lived! It was all insignificant to him now! Everything was! He lost all hope in that instant! All fear! All pain! All rage harvested inside! It was gone! He felt relief! Like a huge weight had finally been lifted off him!

    Fang's screaming got louder as everyone just stood back in horror! He ran with amazing speed and kicked Adelana across the rock to the other side and then, with amazing speed beat her to the other side and kicked her back! He repeated this many times until he finally just let her fall, rolling over and over on her head, as she hit the other side of the rock, her body scraped and bleeding. She forced herself to her feet and yelled out to Fang... "Damn you to Hell! I sware i'm going to kill you!"

    Fang just smirked as Adelana pulled out her bow. Fang began to walk slowly toward Adelana, with his sword drawn and a devilish smile on his face... "STAY BACK!" Adelana called as she shot an arrow into the side of his arm. He continued to move, blood pouring down in an unbelievable rate! The sting from the glass and poision combined was so incredible not even the strongest warriors alive could have stood it, yet it did not faze him with all the rage pushing him forward! She shot another arrow and it pierced his chest but he still moved forward! She shot one more into his head but somehow, Fang still did not die!!!! His will to life was gone! His bond to normal weaknesses, his bond to earth overall! He would let NOTHING get in the way! Adelana reached for her arrows but realized she was out! There were no more!

    She fell to the ground in defeat tears running from her eyes like an ocean as Fang got closer and closer with his sword and called out to her! "ITS TIME FOR YOU TO PAY!!!!!!!! THIS IS FOR EVERYTHING YOU PUT ME THROUGH! THIS IS FOR EVERY TIME I BELIEVED ONE OF YOUR BULL LIES! THIS IS FOR EVERY OUNCE OF PAIN YOU INFLICTED UPON ME OR MADE ME INFLICT UPON MYSELF! ITS TIME TO PAY! I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU! I SWEAR TO GOD I HATE YOU!"

    And as Fang lifted his sword above her head, the devilish grin still on his face, he said the last three words he would ever say in his life... "I love you..." and with that Fang grabbed her by the shirt, pulled her up, kissed her with the deepest kiss anyone possibly could. His eyes closed as tears poured out of them in an amazing rate, and holding her close to him, Fang, with a giant leap, jumped off the side of the rock, pulling Adelana with him, everyones expressions holding even more horror, as he fell slowly down the edge of the rock, kissing her deeply, tears still falling from his eyes, as they both fell into the hot boiling lava, and upon impact to the lava, it began to fire up into the air as if it was a huge flame tornado!



    Upon seeing this Lunar, Mooyan, Andreal, and Edean were all in fear for their own lives but in an instant a bright light had consumed them all! In the light they felt it... they could not see him... but they could feel it in their hearts... Fang's soul was finally at peace once more. As fast as it seemed to occur, they were all back in reality... but it was different. The lava had cooled, the flame tornado was gone... and there was no sign of either, Fang or Adelana. No corpse, no weapons, nothing remained of them. Fang was finally at peace... Every one of the survivors bowed for a moment for their fallen friends, then they proceeded to leave, for without the damage caused they could leave with their lives!



    But even though they survived... the memories would still be there to haunt them for eternity. The rage in Fang's heart... the fire... the fear... but more than anything, the most unexpected thing of them all...

    The Black kiss of suicide...

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    ANALOGY:

    This story is meant to show how much I cared about a girl named Crystel Shaw, to show the impact she had on my life. The "demon" which is mentioned above resembled all the pain left from her leaving me, and how it always hurt me... killed me... and destroyed me from the inside!

    The destruction, letting the rage out, the pain out, not holding anything in anymore was the pain hitting the surface harder than ever before! When I wrote this story I allowed this to happen to me! I allowed myself to be fully taken over by all the hurt! Remembered purposely every thing we had together! Remembered purposely our songs! Our love! Everything! Just as Fang let out his rage in this story, I let out my rage in the moment of writing, more than ever before!

    The suicide! The final kiss, or "The Black Kiss Of Suicide" was meant to resemble it all right there! All the feelings of love I felt for her! Every thing before that could possibly hurt me or make me think of suicide! And how in that moment, in the moment as I wrote of throwing it all into the pit of fire I let it go! I blew all my rage into this writing and "committed suicide" on all my love I felt for her! My soul in the real world was finally at peace from the pain it had caused me, as Fang's soul was at peace in the story.

    This was the hidden analogy in my writing. Im not insane, with desires to kill her, but the suicide and taking her along with me all had a purpose. It was not our physical bodies that died, but the love I held so dear for her that died!

    I hope you enjoyed the story.