Letting Go Of Tightness

• Artist: iiDiedrich
• Description:
• Date: 01/22/2009
• Tags: tightness love peace letgo

I see time moving on without me
So I decided to let go
Its Keeping me from moving forward
and If I'm moving at all my movement is rather slow
I'm letting go of the tightness thats chained around my heart
I call this tightness attachment/
and Its keeping me distant like a trap
Everything thats been moving on without me is no longer by my side
If I could go back and erase time
I wouldn't
but its the future I need to change
It isnt a goodbye
its just something my heart had to clear
The tightness is getting tighter
and its to much to embrace
Its time I brush it off my shoulder
and give myself some peace
I knew it wanst going to be easy
Its now or never that I pull it off
I'm finally moving on/ because I had enough
I'm letting go of the tightness that was chained around my heart
and if it dares to tighten up again
I wont even let it start.

Comments

[Dagon000]

me love 10 out 5

[1ElfenPrincess]

I know how you feel, lol.

[Overworkedandunderpaid]

You have no flow. That's my major issue with this. It's too choppy. You need to smooth it out so that it's easier for one to read. And you probably need to advance your vocabulary just a bit.

Overworked~

[Princess of Darkness 365]

this is good

[Just_another_Ojama]

i can relate to this somehow
If you want to write for gold drop me a pm

[reporter475]

hi

[THE COOKY MONSTR]

im sorry but apresyat this becuz my friend decided to call me and wuz distracting me the whol time but what i managed to wuz pretty good