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Gwen sat in silence with her laptop in hand. She surfed through Google looking up Dream meanings. A pair of crimson eyes have been honting her dreams for weeks now ,and she has had enough of waking in a cold sweat. She sighed as her internet was either going slower the usual or that her fears were making her mind work slower then ever. The page was halfway loaded then the screan went blank. "Damnit not now." She whispered under her breath hitting the power hoping her computer working again. It was false hope as the computer had seen its better days. It was a hand-me-down from her brother. Gwen sighed again defeated by the hunk of old circets. "The one night I need it is the one night it dosen't work!" she closed the computer and pressed her forehead to the smooth plastic. She then placed it on her nightstand and turned off her light. She waited for a minute staring into the darkness her fears growing more prominate. She slid down under her blankets hugging her pillow afraid to fall under the trance that is sleep. Her eyes sagged and she was gone sleep had taken her.
Under the cover of darkness a stranger lurked outside the window watching, waiting for his chance to strike. He slipped silently into Gwens room. The floor creaked slightly and Gwen stured in her sleep. She turned in her sleep letting go of the death grip on her pillow. The dark figure was now standing over Gwen crimson eyes glowing a wicked smile played itself over his face. He leaned in grabing her hair pulling her from her sleep bringing her nightmare to life. Fear took over her body. She tried to scream, anysound that would alert anyone to the presence of the unwelcome guest. He took a deep taking in Gwen's tantalizing scent. His crimson eyes grew brighter he was finally going to get his prize. Weeks of stalking her was finally going to pay off.
Saliva swelled up in his mouth as he lowered his head to the nape of her neck. Running his nose up and down her neck untill he found the perfect place. Gwen's eyes grew wide as she felt two fangs press her skin. A warm trickle go down her neck. She finally found her voice but only one word made its way out vampire. The figure sank his teeth farther into her neck draining Gwen of her life. It all happined so fast the weight was lifted off of her. Gwen's eyes slowly closed as a second figure emerged from the shadows; blood stained his clothes also his lips. Gwen faded into the cold embrace of darkness.
- by Prideful_Ignorance |
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- | Submitted on 01/13/2009 |
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- Title: My Knight in Blood Red Armor
- Artist: Prideful_Ignorance
- Description: Yo....VAMPIRES....are amazing!
- Date: 01/13/2009
- Tags: knight blood armor
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XxInnocent-FearxX - 08/09/2009
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If there is to be more...please msg me~
The grammar is poor but I truly did love the details and everything soo 5~
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- Prideful_Ignorance - 02/16/2009
- Haha Yeah My grammar is truly bad.
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- SugarC0ma - 01/18/2009
- Oh wow this was stunning, truly. You have potential. Much detail, but as said grammar. Love to hear more.
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- The Oracle of Dreams - 01/13/2009
- You're a very good writer, the story is good! You can def. take this somewhere, the reason I gave it 4 stars is because you need to work on your grammar a bit more. Besides that, good job!
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- Chomp Chomp Dead - 01/13/2009
- nice
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