-
All i can see is flames rising, the dark,thick, choking smoke of chairs,tables, and other various object burning, and i hear the shrill scream of a women. I can't see her though but i know she's close by. I want to find her and help her get away, but the flames are so high that i can't go anywere, i can't even get off the floor im laying on. I feel the flames reach the edges of my skin but i don't feel the pain. Then it all goes black.
I jump up in the quiet room, looking for any sign's of the fire but all ways fine. The smell had gone and the smoke disapeared. But i had smelled the smoke and i had seen it but now...mabey im just afraid. Slowly i lowered myself back on the bed and began to think of the next day...if only this day had never come. The next morning i was informed that another women in our family was killed that night...i was shocked at this. Slowly the men and women of our side of this sick family had been killed, and more we're sure to follow but to me it seemed pointless. All this was to prove who is strong? In the end they will be left with nothing at all. They don't realize that, as a family, we are the same. The two brothers who fight over whose right it is to lead this family...its sickening... how many of us must die in order for them to decide? Another day falls so quickly its as if it never happened. The women killed left behind a small child. It's sad that this happens to may children of our family including the two brothers and myself...but i dont even remember her....the mother i never had.
- by II Kazuya_Shibuya II |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/09/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: Broken Bonds part 1
- Artist: II Kazuya_Shibuya II
- Description: well its about a family rivalry. Two brothers are fighting for control and they seperate the family in two, and the one stuck between them is Sara (pronounced Sarah). The youngest family member who lost her memory 10 years ago after an accident.... id really like to get opinions please ^ ^ im still a novice so advice helps alot ^ ^
- Date: 01/09/2009
- Tags: broken bonds part
- Report Post
Comments (1 Comments)
- meizha - 03/29/2009
- Well I was kind of intrigued with the description. But the entry is still too short criticize. You don't have to finish the whole story. Just post,say, a chapter or two. You can send me a message whenever you've updated this, I'd gladly review it.
- Report As Spam