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Saved From the Dark
Part 1:
When the Devil Stole the Moon's Heart
Chapter 4
tab Emmett didn’t react the way I thought he would. There was no yelling, no lectures, and no physical violence.
tab He just ran one of his hands through his orange hair and sighed. “Well, this is a problem.” He said, exhaustion showing in his red-orange eyes.
tab “I’m sorry Emmett, I really am.” I apologized. “I don’t know why, but I just couldn’t stand it anymore! When I thought of dealing with any more of her torture, I wanted to jump off a cliff!”
tab He chuckled. “No need to apologize, Charlie, I probably would have done the same.” He was fiddling with his Solar pendant, which was like my Lunar pendant, except instead of a silver moon on a silver chain, it was a gold sun on a gold chain. “What did you say her name was?”
tab “Alexa LaGuarda.” I answered. “But I might as well call her a devil.” Now that I thought about it, it was easy to picture Alexa with devil horns, a tail, and a tiny pitchfork. I both laughed and cringed at the idea. When I looked back at Emmett, I noticed that he had moved out of his casual position on the couch and was sitting up, deep in thought.
tab “What’s wrong?” I asked him, feeling concern for my only companion.
tab “It’s nothing, don’t worry. It’s just that…” he paused, not sure what to say. “It’s just that I know I’ve heard the name LaGuarda somewhere before, but I just can’t put my finger on it.”
tab I thought about it for a second, but I couldn’t remember hearing the name LaGuarda before I met Alexa. “It must have been before we started traveling together, old friend, because I can’t remember it.”
tab “Maybe…” he mumbled, deep in thought. Then, as if it was a sign, a small picture fell out of his pocket. It was the only picture he had. It was a picture of him and that group of friends I mentioned earlier, with Emmett in the middle, smiling. He picked it up slowly and looked at it. Hi eyes widened for a few seconds. He quickly closed them and his face went blank.
tab “What’s wrong?” I asked.
tab “It’s nothing.” He mumbled. “I just remember where I’ve heard it, that’s all.” He opened his eyes and I could see the sorrow in them. He handed me the picture and pointed to the person standing behind him. “His name was Zero LaGuarda. He was a few years older than the rest of them. He was my best friend, even though we didn’t know much about him.”
tab I looked at the person he was pointing at. Zero LaGuarda had short dark blue hair, eyes that were yellow like a cat’s, and a sarcastic smile. He was related to Alexa, there was no doubt about it. He had his arms wrapped around a girl with brown eyes and red hair. I handed the picture back to Emmett and quickly changed the subject.
tab “So what am I going to do this Sunday?” I asked him.
tab He sighed. “Simple. Just go for a walk around town. Nothing more. Luckily, she promised that she would leave you alone afterwards. All you have to do is try not to form a relationship of any kind with her. Then you can ignore her for the rest of the year.” He concluded. He went back to his casual position on the couch and closed his eyes. I got up and decided to go to bed. As I walked toward my room, I saw Emmett out of the corner of my eye. He was looking at the picture. A tear was running down his face.
- by anna banana panda |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/05/2009 |
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Morbid Humour - 07/06/2010
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Scriven: Because it might have seemed suspicious for him to leave before a school term, semester or year is completed, thereby risking their secret to be unveiled by doubt. Maybe that isn't even the actual case. But just open your mind a little. If you look at things in perspective, the possibilities are endless.
Anna: I'll be waiting eagerly for your next chapter. ;D
PM me about this indent thing? If you just press tab, then I'm a self-professed failure in this high tech generation. XP - Report As Spam
- Morbid Humour - 07/06/2010
- I can tell that the story is clearly progressing towards a climax, which is incredibly important. If a story doesn't have this characteristic, it is flat, for lack of a better word - which your story clearly is not. ^^
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- Morbid Humour - 07/06/2010
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I'm going to have to ask you how you indented everything. I'm having some issues with that. :')
The plot thickens...
Quick question: Where are they? Do they share a mansion? A house? An apartment?
Okay, lie again. Just for my personal clarification, is Emmett also in school with Charlie?
I really liked the ending of this chapter. Not because I wanted it to end, but because it seems somewhat more final than the other chapter endings you have going. - Report As Spam
- Gravetye - 02/17/2009
- Again, I like this. Though, just a question, why did Charlie even bother to put up with Alexa's crap in the first place? Sounds like moving to a different school would have been easier, haha.
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- _xselo94 - 01/19/2009
- Love <3 You going to put up chapter 5 anytime soon? I know what happens already, but the rest of the internet should see!
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