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i did not finish because it seemed to me that the shadow was moving now and breathing heavily and now i started pacing in the hall way but then i started thinking im not going to die this way so i might as well go down stairs so i am not by myself later on that night i stay up to about 5am then turn the lights on and music i started to draw because i was scared so badly from the when me and alyson were home alone i stayed up 3 nights in arow already and i wasnt being too cautious be cause the breathing shadow could have been the man looking threw the window 3 nights ago
TO BE CONTINUED
again
- Title: seeing without sleep
- Artist: Srsly Sxe
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Description:
sorry i couldnt finish the story
this is a sequil to a sequil the first in the series is eyes at the window
the second is noise from the shadow - Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: seeing without sleep
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Zweit - 01/03/2009
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Sequel. The correct spelling is sequel.
Puncuation, spell check, and perhaps a thesuarus. These tools will help you become a better writer. - Report As Spam
- Slash Maverick - 12/30/2008
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Need to fix up grammar, full stops, spelling.
And I don't get why she just randomly starts drawing. Please elaborate. - Report As Spam