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I just moved at this new house in this weird named place, i dont know how to say it. any way i'll skip to the good part... as my mom answered the phone we heard a big "crash!" in the back yard. I ran to the window to see what was going on. Nothing was there... Nobody heard it exept for me, they all thought i was crazy... i knew i wasn't. It was midnight now and i heard the same crash. so i decided to go out there, i could hear it, it was somewhere out here. i searched all night but i couldn't find it!
The next day it was my first day of school here, and all the kids just stared at me as i walked by. "I dont get it" i said to myself as i stared back. This kid heard me and said "You mean you dont know what happend in that house?" I replied "no what are you talking about?" the kid said in a dark voice "Well just a few days ago, the Johnson family moved there, one of the boys heard a crash. At least thats what i heard..." "I heard a crash too but i couldn't find it..." I exclaimed. "oh no! i souldn't be talking to you, it could get me too!" He said as he ran off. I had no idea what he was talking about until the next night.
I was looking up what happend at this house. It said that there have been more than just one dissapearence in this house... There have been thousands... i heard the crash! but this time i also heard a voice. i followed it, it lead me to a erie door. as i opened it the room that i was in turned to darkness. before i knew it there was a boy in front of me, his face pure white, his eyes i..i..i couldn't even describe them... the way he looked at me... At that moment, that was the only sane that i had left of me... but the way the boy looked... TO BE CONTINUED...
- by timothynguyen137 |
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- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: The Crash...
- Artist: timothynguyen137
- Description: I just made this up at the last moment. I was bored so i decided to write a story but i didnt know what to write about... i had no idea it would be this...
- Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: crash stranger
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- The Angel Dystopia - 02/27/2010
- Everything moves way too fast you have to slow down and let your readers think and feel the emotion. they cant feel it if you rush. and add some detail but your story has a good plot
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