Erik 2

• Artist: StormCloud914
• Description: I tried to continue the story. At this rate I may never finish. It's not turning out as good as I thought it would. I need help! Any helpful critiques? I couldn't finish this part either.
• Date: 12/18/2008
• Tags: erik

Emptiness. The feeling of being alone and unloved filled my body until I was... empty. It was taring me apart. Erik! a voice shouted in my head. He did this. All you wanted was to feel the love you didn't get from your family! Why? I didn't know.

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Oy vey.

[Muste01]

wow that was terrible

[tiger_grl_1413]

hey, id be happy to help, but i think i might need more of the story if im going to give you anything good. pm me