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He saw her walk past his house
just a glimpse was all he saw
a streak of yellow and black
he stepped outside of his house to see who it was
at first he didn't see anything
then a slight movement at the top of the hill
he saw a teen
she seemed so familiar
and yet he couldn't identify her
suddely she turned and looked at him
her eyes were wide with excitement and ........insanity
she had a wide smile on her face
then he recognized her
thoughts flew through his head
the only one who understood him
the only one he loved
then thoughts of blood and pain
her face wrought with fear
her whole body covered in blood
all except the tear marks
the knife in her hand the dead man at her feet
her mother in the other room dead
and he rembered the scream that tore from her lips
the knife fell
she ran toward him
and he held her in his arms
as she cried and explained what happened
the man, James, had killed her mother
and then he had gone for her
a knife in his hand
she had disarmed him
and then she took the knife
then she wouldn't speak
he could put it together
he opened his eyes and she was still there staring at him
the girl he had loved and the girl who they had taken from him
had she snapped
what had they done to her there
her eyes started to soften as she looked at him
then went back to the way they had and she
ran
- by bindyblueeyes |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/02/2008 |
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- Title: HER
- Artist: bindyblueeyes
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Description:
this is a short story that i made last year (i think) and when i say "what had they done to her there" i mean in the insane asylum
please rate however you feel about this - Date: 12/02/2008
- Tags: insane murder blood
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Laveanta - 01/10/2009
- wow.....awsome-ness.......5/5
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- The Love of Money - 12/06/2008
- This is better than everything I've seen on here today.
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- Tatsuki_Namina - 12/02/2008
- awesome sad but awesome
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- bindyblueeyes - 12/02/2008
- thaks
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- Hekibel - 12/02/2008
- Hey I quite like this....
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