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''Hello? Cynthia? Young Lady?' hissed Cynthia's mothers voice through the dull, dying cellphone of Cynthia Lilly Javvenson.
But Cynthia stood still, staring at the oddly beautiful man in front of her. He had raised eyebrows, blond hair, green eyes, and a weird, angry expression on his face. He looked as if he was in pain, but his muscles were still tensed, as if he were prepared to spring at vulnarable and human, Cynthia.
She swallowed staring at him, as her mothers sharp-toned voice faded into oblivion.
For the first time, she realized her sorroundings. It was dimlight and damp in the tiny alley. Beyond the single streetlight a couple feet away, the dull reddish walls faded into the dark. The strange beautiful man smiled.
"Hello."
His voice was like velvet, smooth and dark in a strange way, despite the fact that tension quivered through his body. His finger nails were dark, as was his outfit, a black sweater with grey-ish jeans. Spotless. He smiled.
"Hello." Cynthia's voice quivered. This made him grin.
His grin was heartbreaking. It made her shiver. It was almost Wolfish.
"Whats your name, girl?" He asked, still smiling. Cynthia felt she could tell him anything.
"Cynthia Javvenson. You, boy?" although, he could hardly be called a boy, as her a girl. She was eighteen. He looked twenty.
"Galen, Galen Wulfe." his last name was eerie- almost explaining his beautiful, wolfish appearance.
"Hello, Galen."
"Hello Cynthia Javvenson."
They stood staring at eachother, bolth a mix of dazzled and distant. After five minutes, he frowned, then smiled.
"So, Cynthia, would you like me to drive you- home?"
Yes! Yes! Yes!
"Maybe." she crossed her arms. "I just have to know you won't kill me on the way there."
Suddenly he laughed. It made her jump. His laugh was booming- it echoed off the walls. He suddenly stopped. Galen took two steps forward, his eyes flashing and melting Cynthia to a pile of moosh.
"So?"
"Of course!"
She followed him swiftly down the alley...
- by samantha bella |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/16/2008 |
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- Title: The other side of dawn part 1
- Artist: samantha bella
- Description: This is just the first chapter for a mini series I'm writing, about a werewolf who befriends a girl.
- Date: 11/16/2008
- Tags: other side dawn part
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Nihill - 02/15/2009
- This definitely shows potential! Again, there are a few small errors in the composition, but aside from that and the perhaps cliched idea, it's definitely better than most of the tripe on here. 4/5
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- oOHeartsOo - 11/23/2008
- wow i felt as if i was cynthia myself! great story! ^^
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- samantha bella - 11/17/2008
- ha
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