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Lucile played with her friends Tommy and Jackie Burston. Out in a meadow not too far from her home. Jackie and Lucy were running from Tommy in an exciting game of tag. Everyone stopped when they heard Mrs. Thompson call Lucile in for supper. As much fun as she was having, her stomach growled for her mother's delicious cooking, so she waved good-bye to her friends and skipped along back to her house.
Lucy opened the door to find a bloodied mess of flesh on the floor. Her parents. As any child would do she began to sob uncontrollably at the sight of her, now, late parents. In between the sobs a tabbing sound became apparent, a sound Lucy only knew as footsteps. As they edged closer, not only echoing in the small cottage but in her mind, her heart began to race and she was overtaken by fear. Lucy ran from the house, into the woods, never looking back.
- by Airman Ambzy |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/30/2008 |
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- Title: Silver Locket (Preview)
- Artist: Airman Ambzy
- Description: This is the beginning to the short story that is, now, becoming a novel. I will continue to post If asked to do so, because this is a lot of typing is no one was going to read it. Lol. I will post the whole thing in my journal if asked to do so. Comments appreciated.
- Date: 10/30/2008
- Tags: silver locket preview
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Comments (3 Comments)
- soleggiato - 12/16/2009
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you have a few choppy sentences and spelling/grammar problems, but the start is really good.
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- SiaDaBomb - 09/01/2009
- plz continuing posting. it is very good and i am ver interested. If you will plz PM me when u submit the next part
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- Gregbsa263 - 11/10/2008
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wow.....I would continue reading this for sure...
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