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(This is a true story. A true Nightmare)
It was snowing all around me I was sitting in the middle of all the snow. It was cold and dark I could actually feel the coldness in my physical body. Suddenly a figure comes up to me out of nowhere and starts talking to me. But I don't know who she is because she's in the dark and I'm in somewhat in the light.
The girl - It's sad isn't it? Your here all alone with no friends and no family.
Me - Huh? What are you talking about?
The girl - Well your here all alone in the snow. It makes me happy to see you sad.
Me - Sad? I'm not sad I'm happy…*looks away*
The girl - Oh stop lying to yourself. I know you’re sad.
Me - … I'm not…
The girl - *laughs* Look at you. You keep running away from the fact that you’re lonely and sad.
Me -....
The girl - I know how you truly feel.
Me - ....*surprised sad face*
The girl - You feel sad, lonely, and cold .You can't fight it.
The girl - Your friends don't talk to you much do they?
Me - Yes they do! All the time!!
The girl - Oh? Then why haven't they talked to you in a long time?
Me - ….Because….They're busy!
The girl - That's what they want you to think. They don't care if your lonely they really don't care about you…they'll forget you.
Me - Stop it!!! *it echoes then I hold my ears*
The girl - You’re denying it because it's true. What a silly girl.
Me - *starts crying and still holding ears puts head down*
The girl – Poor, poor Usagi. All alone. Your parents don't even care.
Me - *looks up surprised*
The girl - Oh yes I know about that too. They pay more attention to your brother then you. Don't they?
Me - No they don't they love me equally!
The girl - Don't make me laugh. They love your brother more to them you are just an annoying girl.
Me - Stop it please!
The girl - You pretend to smile and be happy but inside you’re dying of coldness and loneliness. And nobody even notices.
Me - *cries harder* PLEASE STOP!!!!
The girl - Your heart is all icy isn't it? From keeping your feelings bottled up all your life. It hurts doesn’t it?
Me - No! No! No! *shakes head holds ears*
The girl -*giggles evilly*
The girl - You are weak.
The girl - You'll never be loved…ever. Nobody will ever care or love you. You’re pathetic.
Me - Who are you to judge me!? And how do you know so much!??!?!
The girl - *comes out of the darkness* because….I am you.
Other me - *smiles evilly*
Me – N-No... *eyes widened*
Other me - Yes. Let me put you out of your misery. It’ll be over soon I promise…it won’t hurt anymore.
Me - W-What? *eyes widened*
The girl - *takes a gun out aims it at my heart and shoots* *smiles*
Me - *falls backwards a puddle of blood surrounded my body the snow was red then it started snowing, I start crying* W-Why?
Other me - *says in a cute way* Bye-bye Usagi-chan.^-^
Then...I wake up. I'm laying down straight completely straight and I don't know how I got that way because I was lying down on my side when I woke up my legs were crossed and my arms crossed too. I got up to check if I was dead. And I wasn't I felt the bullet at my heart I actually felt the pain and it hurt. I felt something at the corner of my mouth and it was...Blood and a tear at the corner of my eye. To this day I still feel the bullet piercing my heart. I was so scared of falling asleep that I watched TV it still haunts me. I'm afraid to go asleep now. I’ll never forget that dream or nightmare…ever…
- by xX rawr-usagi xX |
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- | Submitted on 10/14/2008 |
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- Title: An Angels tears...(A dream)
- Artist: xX rawr-usagi xX
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This is a true story this was actually my dream or nightmare if you will. I did NOT make this up.
P.S. Yes the story is written differently then from what you are used to but this is actually a story form to make it feel like you were watching a movie. Just try to bare with it please. Enjoy! ^-^ - Date: 10/14/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- MAHDUD3S - 04/26/2009
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Wow....That is scary...but maybe your sub-conscious is trying to tell you something...and it might have resorted to this scary nightmare since will it seems so drastic....or maybe it's something else....since you acutally felt the pain when you woke up.....hm....
(but this is my opinion, you don't have to believe me if you don't want to. I'm just trying to help^^) - Report As Spam
- TheYellowCrayonz - 10/15/2008
- Was that actually true?
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- Always Fear Amber - 10/15/2008
- brilliant!
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- kyamie2 - 10/14/2008
- that is kool u should git that published
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- xxAMANDAAAxx - 10/14/2008
- the plot is good, i just think the dialouge is a little weird. good job, though.
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- gaaras and milk - 10/14/2008
- I like the content....it's just the diolouge is a little strange. the way it's set up that is...
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- koolkatx4595 - 10/14/2008
- nice
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