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Prologue
I never get what I wanted. My sister Anne is such a b*****d no matter what I do and what she says is "you? Love me?" All she does is just turn away. I love her at least used to. But guess what? Someday I will be queen...
Chapter 1
I burst into tears with terror. "Why me, father? Why not Anne?" I said. My governess stood silently, staring father. I ran to my chamber weeping. I never did anything wrong to this kingdom nor father nor Anne. I always get into the middle and gets hurts. My chamber isn't really a chamber it is just a little room for my father's pets. Now his pets have their own house. Anne peeked at my room. She looks pail and angry and she said, " look at you Catherine you look beastly. Your mouth is such a blood sucker I bet your a witch. " I looked at her, confused but Anne ran to father I ran to her and grabbed her hair, she grabbed mines. My governess laughed like it was just a big joke. I for one has still tears on my cheeks I couldn't take it anymore. I need to have a plan and plan to move out. I will be queen someday, yes but not with Anne. I always was the loser, I will show who the loser is, Anne and Father
Rose was my best-friend. She lives in an inn next to our palace. I am planning to live in that inn. Father somehow doesn't know about that inn I for one didn't either but when I first met Rose next to the town's lake (that is where I always go when I feel sad.) that was the first time i ever heard a about the inn.Now let me tell you why I was weeping. Anne told Father she meant to be the queen of England not me. I heard their discussion. Anne also told Father I should be killed just like my mother.
- Title: Me or Anne?
- Artist: gleoxxl
- Description: When Princess Catherine heard about Anne and her father's discussion about her execution. She is planning to run away from the palace. This is the first novel of My Princess Problems.This is part one. The second one is coming soon.
- Date: 10/03/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- queffers10 - 10/04/2008
- whoa! alot of different vibes going on there. it was ok..... i would love to see the next chapter so pm me when u do.
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- Wei Hui - 10/03/2008
- There are a couple of places where you forgot to capitilize. I'm also getting some Mary-Sue vibes off of Princess Catherine, so you might want to watch out for that. Also, you might want to adjust Catherine and Anne's behavior and speech patterns. A Princess is unlikely to call somebody a b*****d or pull on each others hair. You also need to work on character motivation. Why does Catherine want to become Queen? Why do Anne and the King hate her to the point of murder? Not too bad however.
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