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One day at a school there where two students, Jenny and Jack Jenny was madly in love with Jack. but Jack didn’t pay any attention to her. One day a online game called journey came to the U.S. millions played it Jenny found out and tried it she got the software and started to play.
The game was highly addicting so she played and played then one day a familiar person came along they fought together so well they became an unbeatable pair. One day the man said “I really wish jenny was playing nothing would be better if I where with her.”
- by Minimandy910 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/02/2008 |
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- Title: the test of love
- Artist: Minimandy910
- Description: two young kids go on a journey of a life time
- Date: 10/02/2008
- Tags: test love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Ninja Kaia - 10/08/2008
- ohhhh i like it and i totally get it. the guy is playing with her and he says it would be better if she wern't playing cause he likes her. it is so sweet. just shows you what addiction can do.
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- xLaydieSkullx - 10/08/2008
- um, i dont exactly get it. wat exaclty is the ending? sorry, just, didnt like it much
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- PrincessNicaPInk - 10/08/2008
- it was good but i think it needs some work 3
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- qorter - 10/03/2008
- It's pretty good, I guess, but it was confusing. You should punctuate it better so it makes it easier and more fun to read.
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