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You walk down the hall. You see that there are no people, doors, or anything else. It's plain and white, the floor, walls and ceiling. You keep walking for some reason, you don't now why, almost like something is pulling you. You keep walking, you start to see doors on both sides. There all closed, but as you walk more and more, then open, more and more. Finally the doors are open and you can see what is inside them. You look into the first one. You are shocked at what you see. People are dieing and screaming. You then look across to the door across from that one. It's a bright place in the sky, there is much happiness.You try to walk towards it, but the door closes. Then, all of the doors close with one loud bang. You jump, your startled from it. What had made all the doors close? You then hear singing. It's beautiful, and draws you to it. You didn't even notice, but the door are gone. The ground is becoming a shade of green. The walls and ceiling are becoming a blue. Then there is trees, and flowers, and even a stream. You stop for a second to look all around. Are you still in the hall way, or really in this wonderful scene? You hear the singing again, and begin to walk towards it. Now the scenery has lost all trees and flowers, just open plains of grass with a clear blue sky. You keep walking, in the distance you see a small tree. It is becoming bigger and bigger, and the singing becomes louder and louder. Your drawn towards it, you must know who is making such a beautiful sound. you get to the tree, there is no one around, but then where is the singing coming from? You look up into the tree, it has rich green leaf's. You hear a little girl giggle. You look down, there she is, peering her head from behind the tree. She has a beautiful looking face. She has black hair just going past her shoulders, and rich green eyes. This gives you a smile to your face. You ask her for her name. She just looks at you and giggles. You ask again, still the same thing. She then comes out from behind the tree. She is warring a plain white dress going down to just above her ankles, she also is barefoot. She has a white rose in her hand. She gives you the rose, but while looking at the rose, a throne pricks your skin, and there is a little drop of blood. You look up, and see the girl is missing. You turn around and see the grass is gone, and is replaced by a barren wastes land. There is nothing, just flat empty, land. You look back, and it's the same thing. Now the tree is dead and withered, it's leaves are gone, exposing it's leaf's. You begging to worry, what is happening? You look down to see if the rose is still there. It's not what you though was going to be there. The white rose is still in your hand. In your panic you throw the rose behind you, and begin to run past the tree. You keep running and running, you don't know where, but you just want to leave this place. Your scared, you want to be home, with your family and loved ones. Tears start to roll down your eyes. You trip, you lay on the ground for a second, you manage to get up and sit on your knees. You begin to cry looking down and the ground. Then you fell a soft hand on your cheeks wiping away the tears. "Why do you cry?" You explain, your scared and wish to be home. You fell them kiss you on the forehead. "Do not fell sad, for I will always be here to protect and love you." You go to look up to this person, but before you are able to, you awake in your bed. He sit up frantically. Was that all a dream? You look at your hand, the blood from before is gone. But then you look down to your lap, there is a beautiful white rose. You go to pick it up, but before your eyes, it turns red. How could of this happened? You then notice there is a envelope tied to the stem of the rose with a green ribbon. You pick you the rose, then open the envelope. Inside is a picture of the field, with the tree, and the little girl standing in front of it smiling almost as if she was looking at you. You then grab a piece of paper inside the envelope. It reads, "Do not fell sad, for I will always be here to protect and love you." You look out the window and see the blue sky, you smile, and then it feels like someone is smiling back to you.
- by x Crazy Brutis x |
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- | Submitted on 09/13/2008 |
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- Title: Walking Down A Hall..
- Artist: x Crazy Brutis x
- Description: This is just something I wrote off of some insperation. Tell me what you think, and if I should write another something like this. Thanks!
- Date: 09/13/2008
- Tags: walking down hall
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sarahbeasley - 09/13/2008
- Wow thatw as interseting I likes it!
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- bLoNdE_Iz_tHe_NeW_sMaRt - 09/13/2008
- creative but fell is spelled Feel! and theres some words mis spelled and left out, proofread it again
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