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"Splish, splash. Splish splash. Splish splash. The salty water going back and forth on to shore. Loudly but nice. I am on land. As far as I can see is sand and water. But the ocean is long. Maybe never ending...If it is I want to swim it. All the way. Faster and faster. More and more. Till I find the end...Till I have proof it is real what they are saying. Those rumors. They always say it ends. Secretly I think it never ends. How could it? Doesn't it keep going? If it does end, where? In heaven? Oh boy, if it does end in heaven, I will swim it. I have to. I don't want to live anymore! It is no fair. If I was a dove I would fly to heaven, so why can't I swim to heaven?"
Thats what I thought before I died by swimming so far. Now I am in heaven. It does end in heaven, if u swim far enough and die to go there. Now here I am. With the angels. I know those rumors were not true. Cause now I am here. A place where I really and maybe even needed to go. I am happy here. Now I can look down at the never ending ocean.
- by kitty_lover_nice- |
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- | Submitted on 08/03/2008 |
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- Title: Beyond the ocean.
- Artist: kitty_lover_nice-
- Description: I guess its just a little thing i put on here.....
- Date: 08/03/2008
- Tags: ocean
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Comments (4 Comments)
- u_dont_deserve_it - 12/07/2008
- This is a nice, and well written story!
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- kitty_lover_nice- - 08/06/2008
- thx guys i know its not "amazing" but its good enough......
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- Himiko_Ban - 08/03/2008
- thanks for reading mine. I liked yours. I didn't expect this story to be yours, but I happened to click on it. Lol thats funny. Anyways, good work. Thx for the comment XD
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- angstar54 - 08/03/2008
- Wow, i like it!
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