2012 A.D

• Artist: XxVandredxX
• Description: a story i stirred up on the spot for people wondering i hate grammar and punctuation so i dont use them too often its about the Mayans prediction of (or their calenders end ) end of the world but in my words whic in my case the story is an invasion Enjoy...
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: aliens world 2010mayans armageddon

the dust sheilded hells ground. the rivers of wine drip down my sword but my comrades remain angels i remain the unsouled and uncharted wanderer stained by the enemies wrath i lay hear in pain the souls of hell waiting to take me down to their lair i wait and watch the sky the mist of the morning light the smell of dead the final shadow lay over me i see them them who did this to us they who betrayed us they who said "we come in peace" to them it was a joke we did not see the light whe saw dark we fell for their tricks and for that we pay a visit to the devils gates and some to the skys of god for those who were great and those who were evil
darkness fell onto this earth on this faithfull year...they said it would come...did we believe them...they were smart...the irony
- c.2012 A.D
Date: unknown
Pedestrian status:K.I.A
they said in 2012 the world would end we shouldve listened...
we didnt

Comments

[systemofaserj]

dude u guys his writing is awsome who really cares about punctuation i mean really and dude it seems like you were there your self thats really good bro

[Dark_Gale017]

Im not big on grammar and punctuation, I try when I write but in your case I think it it better this way. It looks hurried like it really was written when the world was about to end. Cuz really who would have the time for grammar and what not, if you were about to die. I give you all stars!

[erikakaiser]

I, on the other hand, do not understand if you're too lazy. If you're going to submit writing anywhere, let alone to an arena (even if it is in beta mode), at least have the sense of mind to run it through a spell check. Seriously, all that is is one horrendously long and badly-spelled sentence.

[Lawlipoop]

Ah, I get it. It's a nice story. Although, it would be much better if you atleast put punctuation. But, I understand if you're to lazy. Lawl