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- | Submitted on 08/12/2009 |
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- Title: Love Hurts
- Artist: Vibrant Danie
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Description:
I never knew it would end up like this - my heart broken - my feelings more than just destroyed. I didn't even see it coming.
This is a REALLY long short story... Sorry about the length, but I am absolutely sure that if you read it, you will fall in LovE with it - Date: 08/12/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- User 18688290 - 08/13/2009
- Oh, okay. I get it now. Thanks for explaining, and good work.
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- Vibrant Danie - 08/12/2009
- Yes, the narrator was Death. At one part of the story, he pretends to be the girl's brother, whom died.
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- User 18688290 - 08/12/2009
- This is an amazing piece of writing...the only thing is, and I'm sure it was written right in front of my face, but who is the narrator? The brother? For a while I was thinking it was death. But it was really, very, very good writing. I loved it.
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