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You're like a prince.
Riding on a horse.
Trying to save your princess.
Save her from the castle.
That hold her in.
That prince on his horse.
Bumped into the wall.
And took the princess away.
Happy ending is what they say.
Now I wonder.
If you just had look a sec more.
You would have seen.
Where that castle was for.
It wasn't suppose to let her in.
But to let you out.
She never wanted.
You promised her the world.
But she wanted a house.
Save inside, the castle she build.
She made it her self.
So everyone stays out.
She never wanted all.
Now he takes her away.
To the happiness is what they say.
But I wonder, when does the happiness fail?
- by Hopefull_Aira |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/22/2009 |
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- Title: Your like a prince
- Artist: Hopefull_Aira
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Description:
First Time i ever posted someting of my work.
It isn't the best one. But i kinda like this one.
So i posted here. - Date: 05/22/2009
- Tags: your like prince
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Comments (6 Comments)
- sapphira-DoG - 08/08/2009
- Wording is a bit off, hun, but it's still good! :3
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- Princess of Darkness 365 - 07/25/2009
- It is very good.
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- Just_another_Ojama - 07/21/2009
- this is an awesome poem i love poems that tell a tale. please do more.pm me when u do
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- cheazyniff339 - 07/20/2009
- it could have been worded a bit better, its too confusing.
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- Nottie_Alex - 07/14/2009
- Im confused
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- The Grooster - 07/14/2009
- Very deep and well thought out 5/5
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