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i woke one moring, everything seemed fine.
i looked at my watch, it was nearly school time
i got dressed and brushed my hair
i jumped on my bike, soon i was there
every night i dreamed of your grin
i jumped of my bike then went in
i looked around, where were you?
afew other people wondered too
i asked the teacher where you were
'he was in an accident' my heart did tear
'what kind of accident?' i replied
'a car crash, he nearly died'
i rushed too the hospital when school did end
I had too find out, was i more then a friend?
i asked for your room, i was allowed in
i saw you in the bed, there was no nice grin
i wondered if you were going to awake
i waited for ages, you made my heart ake
the minute i was about to leave,
yours eyes opened, i was relieved!
'are you alright?' i said, my heart pounding
'i have to tell you something' i said, my heart loudening
'i love you' i said, with a little smile
he didnt reply, it took a while
'i lov--' he began but then stopped
his eyes closed, the machine 'popped'
'Dominic?' i said, worried sick
was he playing some sort of trick?
but his heart stopped, the machine was fried
because at that moment, you had just died
every time i wondered what you were going to say
i never stopped thinking about that upsetting day
i never laughed, i never smiled
only tears came out, that piled
so whenever im sad, and cry
i think of the day when you did die
- by Luna Deslumbrado |
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- | Submitted on 02/20/2009 |
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- Title: The True sad love story
- Artist: Luna Deslumbrado
- Description: this story is true. it is about what happened in my life. if you read, you can leave a comment, i made a poem of it.
- Date: 02/20/2009
- Tags: true love story
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Comments (7 Comments)
- wildflower2828 - 06/14/2009
- It is sad. He probably was going to say I love you too. You did a nice job of putting your feelings and thoughts into words. Id give it a five out of five but it says its not open for voting.
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- guineapiggirl34 - 06/02/2009
- That's so sad, but i loved the poem. I'd give u a 5/5.
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- Light-Dark12 - 05/26/2009
- So sad...
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- crazy_life247 - 05/17/2009
- awww ... that sucks.... i bet you anything u'll find love again. smile
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- cuterhian15 - 05/12/2009
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nice poem... but sad topic.. but i like it
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- Luna Deslumbrado - 05/10/2009
- sevenfold: it says at the top poetry and lyrics.. oh well
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- Cl3v3rRey - 05/09/2009
- sorry that has to suck but i bet you'll find love again
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