The Man Who Walked Past Araby

• Artist: jtelroy
• Description: The second song, in my story. Personally I like it better than "Isaiah" but that's for you to judge!
  
  Content: The Star protects an innocent man near their sanctuary called Araby.
  
  Coming Soon: The Prophecy revealed
• Date: 11/13/2008
• Tags: araby isaiah endwar

Darkness shrouds, evil clouds
and follows the man
who walks past Araby

On he walks, while Demon stalks
but notice he not,
as he walked past Araby.

A Demon here?! The End War is near!
Go Star, Go! Use wit, sink fear
and save the man who walks past Araby!

Matthew does land, Mariah does Stand,
Down follows Jenna, and so Isaiagh does command.
Though fear they feel, give him a hand.
Protect the man who walks past Araby.

Soul weaspons shown, enemy known

Demons Come Fight! I Fill darkness with light!

Hunter/Angels are done, this battle is won.

The Star returns, and this lone man learns
Angels exist! (but this world will burn)
Grumbles the man who walked past Araby.

Comments

[Skyneah]

Oh well. I don't give a crap if it belongs in poetry or not. This is a really great poem.

[Emanuelle Simoen]

Interesting repetition at the end of each stanza, reminiscent of some classic poems I've read. Maybe I'm overcritical of poetry/writing, but your rhyme scheme was a bit uneven, especially since there was no noticeable trend in rhythm. I would like to hear it as a song, though, where it might be better. smile

[insane clown master]

wicked awsome dude u rule!

[Clapper Cheeks]

Who gives a s**t if this is in fiction? Everyone makes a big deal about it. It was really good,

[boredbo987]

....wow

[iceman320109]

I agree it belongs in poetry, have to mark you down for that mistake. Sorry. Otherwise it really brought out feelings, keep going.

[starlight-xB]

yea it does..still a nice piece of work.. needs some editing but nice...>.<;;;