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Like a dream
flowing and swifting
every thing dark
slowly you open you eyes
you cant breath
you try to swim up
but can only go down
you are drowning
every thing fades
then theres a bright light
then only darkness
befor you know it
its over...
- by Inu-girl12000 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/31/2008 |
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- Title: drowing
- Artist: Inu-girl12000
- Description: did this when i ws sad
- Date: 07/31/2008
- Tags: oceandrowningdarkness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- LOL15000 - 10/22/2009
- What. Why do I only get 1 comment and you get 25??? Dang. Good story by the way.
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- airen101 - 08/23/2009
- oops sorry I posted on the wrong thread, but your poem is good too smile
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- airen101 - 08/23/2009
- this is good. Please ask him to continue.
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- LittleMissy666 - 08/14/2009
- wow u are realy deep something most have had to happen to u to wrigth this
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- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 08/11/2009
- oooh, i have one similar to this ! biggrin Read mine? Anyways, yeah. i adore it . short. simple. i mean, yeah, there are a few mistakes, but so what? we all make them smile if i could rate it, i would rate it 5 biggrin
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- Katsumi_Kiyoko - 06/29/2009
- This short poem brings all that i think when in doubt.
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- Just_another_Ojama - 06/23/2009
- deep and emotional.drop me a line if u write more
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