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have you ever felt like life was agienst you,
like you were falling down a endless pit of suffering and missery??
have you ever felt like you met your last moment in life,
were you got so scared that you thought you were going to die??
have you ever felt like someone has broken your heart,
who has ripped it in to and cant fix it??
has any of thease things happend to you?? i know they have happend to me... think about wat you do in life.
- by pinkpunk91 |
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- | Submitted on 07/22/2008 |
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- Title: have u ever felt...
- Artist: pinkpunk91
- Description: i was vary deprest when i made this. hope u like it.
- Date: 07/22/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- W~A~L~L~F~L~O~W~E~R - 01/29/2009
- uh huh...
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- PsychG - 01/19/2009
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I get your message, but the followthrough is bad. Learn to spell, and work on your tenses. Tenses are kinda' hard for me to keep up with as well, but you made obvious mistakes. If you put something in the arena, make sure you edit or revise it first.
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- ItJustTyo - 01/12/2009
- Nicely written, I think whenever someone expresses how they truly feel it is inspiring. Keep it up!
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- i feel conned - 12/29/2008
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Wow... you know me so well.
5/5...! - Report As Spam
- belukat912 - 07/25/2008
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The guy below me is lying it's to emo. And he's emo too.
=P - Report As Spam
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