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Cookies. By Miranda
"Do you like them?" Asked Brittney
"do i like what?" Asked Zuka
"COOKIES,DUMMY!" yelled brittney
"HECK YEA! Yelled Zuka
idea Lets go eat sum cookies!
OK
Lets all go to the store to get ourselfs some COOKIES AND MILK!! 3nodding
they went to the store
"SOME CHOCHOLATE CHIP COOKIES PLEASE!"they yelled. "Sorry,all out!" said the man
"CRAP IT!!" Said Zuka
"crap it is right!"said brittney
"hey peoples!"said simon as he walked in wih a pack of cookies
"im here too!"said Miranda
they were dating
"can zuka and me have a cookie?"asked brittney
"uhhh....ask miranda"said simon
"Si!"said miranda
"ok ok.yesh!"said simon
they goobled them all down
- by Neon_Sovereign |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/11/2009 |
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- Title: cookies
- Artist: Neon_Sovereign
- Description: wel,its a funny story,see i was going on a hunger strike.....my cousin was eating cookies!i will kill him >:-/ trust me,ill be adding more
- Date: 01/11/2009
- Tags: cookie
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Comments (7 Comments)
- A-Silent-Friend - 04/18/2009
- funney yes, check spelling, puntuation, grammer, and a whole bunch of other things
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- Segador Severo - 04/12/2009
- you should check your spelling
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- blazzed goku619 - 04/06/2009
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Well, Its short, your punctuation is bad and spelling is even worse sad
Vocabulary is pretty bad and the overall feel of the story isnt great sad
Sorry. - Report As Spam
- XXxxKarimaxxXX - 04/02/2009
- um... you spelt gobbled wrong......
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- Shelcombakasfire - 03/25/2009
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This didn't really go anywhere.
And... it's poorly written.
I lol'd. - Report As Spam
- Hear Panda Roar - 03/20/2009
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AH man!! sum of u guys r mean!! just cuz its not an actual story doesnt mean she cant post it, its just random stuff who cares! i do. lol its awesome 5/5
btw could u maybe rate and comment my two postings? - Report As Spam
- cute_girl4293 - 02/21/2009
- It's funny but I don't think it was necessary to post it here.
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