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Like a dream
flowing and swifting
every thing dark
slowly you open you eyes
you cant breath
you try to swim up
but can only go down
you are drowning
every thing fades
then theres a bright light
then only darkness
befor you know it
its over...
- by Inu-girl12000 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/31/2008 |
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- Title: drowing
- Artist: Inu-girl12000
- Description: did this when i ws sad
- Date: 07/31/2008
- Tags: oceandrowningdarkness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- TheFlamingArmada - 05/01/2009
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that's really good. rate mine to?
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- Sparky328 - 04/24/2009
- holy carp. that is amazing. it seems like my depression story... *sigh* whatever, you did great!!!!
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- yocbrfool - 04/18/2009
- i think it s great the rest of the people r 2 shalow 2 understand it it scars them
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- Mutandanstan - 03/25/2009
- shouldn't you have entered this into the poetry and lyrics section?
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- icefox5 - 03/14/2009
- nice...um.....kinda short...its a lil vague to....no offense...i like happy poetry...and very discriptive ones...that don't sound weird....
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- granderson - 03/09/2009
- this was a very nice peice of work
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- BiggieSmall123 - 03/07/2009
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It just tells,
c'mon- give us emotions!
MAKE ME FEEL LIKE I'M DROWNING.
I want emotions :3
But i kinda liked the directness of this.
4/5 - Report As Spam
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