They will Fall

• Artist: CitzenGuard
• Description: He worked for an Empire
  that he loved very much,
  the king , the senate even the army were corrupted and ruthless.
  Some had honor for the first empire but time has passed,
  things need to be done ,
  betrayal , love,war,hate,honor,
  
  
  sorry if i meant some mistakes.
• Date: 07/28/2008
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Here is a short note of my story , i will create a journal of it later , if i win


Edward was a brave warrior for the empire for 12 years , when the kingdom had a new senate,Army guards, King , Things changed. edward was one day choose to guard the king
in a patrol to a nearby city , when it was ambushed by masked men and all were killed also
the king, 2 of Edwards close freinds, and edward were alive still and hurt , edward and his friends are framed for murder because thier farmers and knights say they witnessed the guards did it , later they find out , that the kings double was killed and the real king staged it so vetrans of the old empire wont start a revolution

Comments

[akjhurg]

sounds like a good story idea, if you write the full thing I'll read it.

[Tissue93]

this i s the most horrible thing i have read on this site so far and that is saying massive amounts of horrid garbage

[devils delinquent]

this story was the best 1 i have read in days

[PetitCharatChan]

It's kind of hard to say what I think when it's just a summary...can't comment on style and whatnot.