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You are the hushed,
The secret, the kept,
How my heart was in silence swept.
You are the rhyme,
The tale, the word,
The voice that lingers though unheard.
You are the chain,
The master, the rule,
The snare that has captured a fool.
You are the wish,
The dream, the song,
The love that never quite belonged.
- by TinyButShiny |
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- | Submitted on 02/12/2009 |
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- Title: Longing
- Artist: TinyButShiny
- Description: O, the woes of unrequited love and the poetry that ensues! xD haha, this is dedicated to, ahem... This is a Valentine's day poem of sorts. It's a little gloomy though, and it's pretty short xD. Pardon me and my poetry noobness :).
- Date: 02/12/2009
- Tags: longing valentinesday love unrequited
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Comments (7 Comments)
- dark_elven_vampire - 04/22/2009
- wow this is really deep i love it
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- Harmonious Dischord - 04/15/2009
- Great job! I really like it! 5/5
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- TinyButShiny - 04/11/2009
- is it still in the wrong category? but I see it in poetry & lyrics D:
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- XXxxannaroxs123xxXX - 04/04/2009
- nice
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- Vivian Arcane - 03/26/2009
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I loved it. It was very...well brilliant quite frankly. Great job and keep up the good work. n.n
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- Savior_ofunsafespirits - 03/25/2009
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This is a poem, and I know you've probably been told this a lot, but it does not belong in fiction, it belongs in poetry and lyrics.
sorry to be the 1000th (probably) person to tell you that.
REALLY GOOD 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Rugged Individualist - 03/21/2009
- It's good. But it's misplaced. I'd give it higher rating if it were properly placed. A 3/5. Excellent word choice.
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