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Cookies. By Miranda
"Do you like them?" Asked Brittney
"do i like what?" Asked Zuka
"COOKIES,DUMMY!" yelled brittney
"HECK YEA! Yelled Zuka
idea Lets go eat sum cookies!
OK
Lets all go to the store to get ourselfs some COOKIES AND MILK!! 3nodding
they went to the store
"SOME CHOCHOLATE CHIP COOKIES PLEASE!"they yelled. "Sorry,all out!" said the man
"CRAP IT!!" Said Zuka
"crap it is right!"said brittney
"hey peoples!"said simon as he walked in wih a pack of cookies
"im here too!"said Miranda
they were dating
"can zuka and me have a cookie?"asked brittney
"uhhh....ask miranda"said simon
"Si!"said miranda
"ok ok.yesh!"said simon
they goobled them all down
- by Neon_Sovereign |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/11/2009 |
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- Title: cookies
- Artist: Neon_Sovereign
- Description: wel,its a funny story,see i was going on a hunger strike.....my cousin was eating cookies!i will kill him >:-/ trust me,ill be adding more
- Date: 01/11/2009
- Tags: cookie
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Cl3v3rRey - 05/21/2009
- Okay it was funny and cute and I personally don't care about your grammer mistakes but I'm not saying you should not practice writing.
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- dragonkiller20121 - 05/13/2009
- i have to kinda agree with spelling and grammar if you are going to write a story please please this my biggest pet peeve in the world make sure you spelling everything correctly that is why when you are writing the stuff it show's up red and that will get you rated low.
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- RukaxAkatski - 05/12/2009
- It cool. I hate people who get u about spling look people who dis i spled spl wrong you gona get on me huh leave us who hate grammer and spling alone
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- Ninja Baby Blues - 05/10/2009
- omg, lol!!! I LOVE IT!!!! whatevs to spelling and grammar! sooooooooooo cute do more!!!!!!!!!!
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- r33na1 - 05/01/2009
- i don't give a damn about spelling and grammer i just don't like the story
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- Riven Cylor - 04/28/2009
- wow some of the ppl comenting are really rude it's ok to say spell chek but u don't have to insult it i liked it who cares if it's randome atleast it's better then reading a bunch of emotionless stuff for a cuple dozen pages and further more if you don't like it don't comment no ones making you read it again if you don't want to
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- kima93 - 04/26/2009
- GRAMMAR, learn the word and check the spelling!
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