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The cold wind slapped and grabbed at his cheeks as if warning him.
The boy was scared, no denying it, but he felt it was the only way.
Opposing the calls and cries of the frightened onlookers, he leaned forward and let his body play at the mercy of the wind.
Quickly the bridge above him receded as the ground below grew closer.
He was crying, his tears leaving a trail that plundged after him.
He flashed though his memories.
The feelings that drove to commit his final act welled up and time slowed down.
He as alone, a fact he blamed himself.
How his cries for help landed on deaf and uncaring ears!
All his life he was searching for someone, anyone...
Who was a friend. But no one came.
His mind took him to his parents divorce and all the isolation he felt without his father.
He remembered watching clasmates and kids palying with their mothers and fathers. An act he never enjoyed.
The air filled his ears and seemed to whisper to him, inciting more memories.
A girl filled his mind.
He saw her as clear as if she was there with him.
He felt he loved her. But was scared she didn't even like him back.
The wind told his, "You don't know that because you never tried tried to find out."
He cried harder, the infinite oceans spilling over his cheeks and ears.
He saw his family and what happy times they gave him.
He saw himself opening presents from a time long ago with friends he once had.
Then it hit him.
What a terrible mistake he had made!
The mind of the wind brushed over him and gave him all the answers.
The girl did like him, he was just too depressed by self-doubt to believe it.
He felt anger at his actions. All his pain was self-inflicted.
He realized he never even tried. Not once.
Now it was too late.
The air switched around him signaling the end of the fall.
His lat thought was that he had a happy life that he expected too much from.
He hoped that he had helped someone during his life at least once. Even a little.
The petrified spectators watched in horror as the boy's last moments became his calmest ever.
The boy's pain had been healed by his last thoughts...
Not his death.
- by Hero_Linkrc |
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- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: The Last Leap
- Artist: Hero_Linkrc
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Description:
This is something I wrote down on a thought that was actually pretty sad.
Whenever I reread this I get really sad because I felt that I would have done that at one time before. - Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: pain last leap suicide
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Dasuna - 02/18/2009
- All I can say is that during half of this story I felt like I was going to cry because half of the stuff in here happens to kids in everyday life...And it's also happened to me...but one person can open that closed door for you...But you have to keep searching for that person...I know I have.
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- Bird_Of_Prey006 - 02/11/2009
- Wow that is kinda sad that he was only clam at his death......
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- Adriana Pineda - 02/05/2009
- wow that was really good
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- Catgaph - 01/30/2009
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I act of suicide is the final statement. You touch on the facts that even though he felt as if no one cared, there was a person who loved him, that is was his own blindness that kept him in Isolation.
This is a sad but true statement for many people wjo commit the final act. I find it amazing when someone write the truth so boldly. Very well done. - Report As Spam
- MoonFilledTears - 01/15/2009
- This is very good, maybe needs a little rewording here and there, but you can feel the pain and resolution. You did an amazing job at getting the feeling behind the story. You also had an amazing ending that strikes a deep chord. Good job! ^^
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- Takashi Hiroyama - 01/15/2009
- I love it, 5-stars, really good.
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- TheDarkArtist - 01/04/2009
- Very well written, I can just see it happening. It's really depressing, but good. Poor guy
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