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i started waiting the moment i was born.
i waited for you to be brought into this world,
waited for us to meet.
waited still for you to notice me.
i waited for you to love me like i have always loved you.
waited to make your legs weak
and now i continue to wait for you, for you to be mine
forever.
- by insainartist |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: waiting
- Artist: insainartist
- Description: the history of us
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: waiting love forever
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ii_Simply_Cookie_ii - 05/09/2009
- thats really good well done check out my profile pllzzzzz?
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- yokume210 - 04/24/2009
- Wrong catagory! That sounds like peotry...wat i'm not kidding!
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- Light-Dark12 - 04/23/2009
- That's pretty much poetry...so put in the Lyrics/Poetry Arena!
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- dizziedobsession - 04/11/2009
- i like it!
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- Hear Panda Roar - 03/20/2009
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it needs more emotion right now i almost feel like im skimming over someones feelings for someone else, does dat make sense
anyway could u rate and comment my two postings its a really bad poem and a really good story - Report As Spam
- AmaniPhoebe - 02/07/2009
- well thats a long wait. but i guess that persons worth it
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- Robot Squirrel - 01/28/2009
- I sense no emotion. This looks more like something you would doodle in your notebook at school than something you put thought into.
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