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From Night to Day the moon slowly passes away
From Morn to night everything will be alright
As the day goes from morn to noon
The day will surely fade soon
If you don't like this poem that's alright
I'll just turn you into a frog when your sleeping tonight
For those who do good deed's
things will come
in morn when everything's surrounded by the sun
- by Heresy Is Free |
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- | Submitted on 09/15/2008 |
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- Title: Night To Day
- Artist: Heresy Is Free
- Description: Just a short poem
- Date: 09/15/2008
- Tags: nighttoday
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sexiest Baby_Diva - 05/17/2009
- awesome
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- Sparky328 - 05/09/2009
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cool
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- Killamonga - 05/02/2009
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u put morn instead of morning on the second line
From Morn to night everything will be alright
see? - Report As Spam
- justamanda325 - 04/16/2009
- interesting
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- InkheartGirl165 - 04/14/2009
- U can call me a tough critic, but I think the rythm of the poem was off in a couple places. Over all it was fine though. ^^
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- MAST3RLINXX - 04/03/2009
- i sort of dont get it well i gess i like it good job
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- myemoluv94 - 03/27/2009
- i liked it,now i wanna be a poet
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