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Like a dream
flowing and swifting
every thing dark
slowly you open you eyes
you cant breath
you try to swim up
but can only go down
you are drowning
every thing fades
then theres a bright light
then only darkness
befor you know it
its over...
- by Inu-girl12000 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/31/2008 |
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- Title: drowing
- Artist: Inu-girl12000
- Description: did this when i ws sad
- Date: 07/31/2008
- Tags: oceandrowningdarkness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- TerraHilde - 06/05/2009
- first of all, drowning, not drowing. Second of all, this should be in poetry, third of all, amazing and impressive.
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- ForeverLouise - 06/04/2009
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..Wow,
..NICE JOB!!..
..i really don't get it at first but oh! Its great..
..however, u must choose the Poetry section, that is more compatible..
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- vgaddict93 - 06/03/2009
- I can tell you were sad. I love writing stuff like this when I'm sad, it's medicinal.
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- vgaddict93 - 06/03/2009
- I can tell you were sad. I love writing stuff like this when I'm sad, it's medicinal.
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- Dark_Star-221 - 05/29/2009
- i dont get it
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- hinatagirl1128 - 05/11/2009
- well it is good but i dont think it is a drawing so next time pay more attention to which catagory you are posting
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- jungle elf - 05/08/2009
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wrong section but still good
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