They will Fall

• Artist: CitzenGuard
• Description: He worked for an Empire
  that he loved very much,
  the king , the senate even the army were corrupted and ruthless.
  Some had honor for the first empire but time has passed,
  things need to be done ,
  betrayal , love,war,hate,honor,
  
  
  sorry if i meant some mistakes.
• Date: 07/28/2008
• Tags:

Here is a short note of my story , i will create a journal of it later , if i win


Edward was a brave warrior for the empire for 12 years , when the kingdom had a new senate,Army guards, King , Things changed. edward was one day choose to guard the king
in a patrol to a nearby city , when it was ambushed by masked men and all were killed also
the king, 2 of Edwards close freinds, and edward were alive still and hurt , edward and his friends are framed for murder because thier farmers and knights say they witnessed the guards did it , later they find out , that the kings double was killed and the real king staged it so vetrans of the old empire wont start a revolution

Comments

[Raze of the Dark Eyes]

sounds really good, very Count of Monte Cristo-ish

[rockguitarhedgehog1]

I say the same thing as PetitCharatChan, but it sounds interesting.

[Cerberus0.4]

Shweet! Write more

[xX_KoNeko_Mew_Xx]

you should write more of it but be more detailed
like as if you were the person yourself.

[Michelle the Huntress]

You should stick with this idea.

[whiteshadowkakashi]

im with you cascaderuins

[CascadedRuins]

I personaly don't think that you should have said that. -regarding to the second comment down- because it just wasn't needed. Maybe he just started writing, looking back on all my old stories they looked alot worse, but that's how you learn. So to the writer, keep it up! Make a great story to show that jerk! When it's done I will totally read it!