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I met this one guy
I didn't know him much
He was in one of my classes
I didn't talk to him much
We did a two-person assignment and he was my partner
It was awkward much
We started to talk more and more
I enjoyed our conversations much
We started hanging out as buddies
I liked him very much
We graduated and we still hung out but there was something more
I loved him so much
We got married and he went into the war
I missed him very much
I heard a knock on the door, but it wasn't him, it was a message. A message that carried the word of death
I was hurting much
My world became gray, my life had no meaning, the bird's sweet song was sour, and i wept until my eyes were dry
I just need him so much
- by TheUncontrollable |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/06/2010 |
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- Title: MUCH
- Artist: TheUncontrollable
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Description:
this is not real (i finally figured out the difference between non-fiction and fiction :P)
its been a while since i wrote anything so it might show
i hope you enjoy it! - Date: 04/06/2010
- Tags: much love poem
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Comments (7 Comments)
- deathgod110 - 11/28/2012
- aww soooo sad i love is so much
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- KuroNekoNyanNya - 09/03/2012
- So sad!!!! I loved it!
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- cutebrunette1238 - 06/04/2012
- this almost made me cry 5/5!
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- Anki_Hazura - 01/27/2012
- reminds of what my brother wrote and i have a reprised version of it on my pro.
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- UnknownProxy - 09/10/2011
- it was amazing 5/5
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- bob199424 - 03/02/2011
- I liked it. Well done.
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- XxShot_DownxXBy_Hippies - 12/11/2010
- Aww Such a sad poem :'(
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