- by _Lacie_Scythe_ |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 02/02/2011 |
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- Title: Marionette
- Artist: _Lacie_Scythe_
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Description:
The Title tells all.
Please comment and such.
Also, if your going to critiques my art, please say it in such a way that I can acually learn something from it; to help me improve my art -.-*
Tell me things that you like if you're going to tell me the things you don't.
Don't tell me to fix stuff thats obviously messed up on (i.e: the hand being a little too small, some shading being off-) - Date: 02/02/2011
- Tags: marionette
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Comments (2 Comments)
- _Lacie_Scythe_ - 02/03/2011
- Thanks for the advice.
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- Scrubbledubble - 02/02/2011
- For a marionette, the body needs to be limp and lifeless, held up only by the strings. Make those strings the point where the rest of her body falls around them (if that makes sense) and she'll look more like a puppet. As it is, it just doesn't look believable. The sense I get from the drawing is "I'm looking over here. I think something's tugging on my arm, but oh well."
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