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  • Title: ._.
  • Artist: InnocenceIsMine
  • Description: Another drawing :D Srry for the bad proportions, and messy lines ^-^;. Please tell me nicely on what to improve on TY.
  • Date: 08/02/2010
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • Revolver Oshawott - 08/05/2010
  • The thing covering her mouth is too small. It gives us the impression that the rest of her face is cut so it would fit, and that she has a very small neck. Make it a little bit longer and wider, as well as adding a few lines to the "neck part" to make is look like it's a little more loose.
  • YUKlE - 08/05/2010
  • At Lady Sume-
    Her face is half covered up, that dot you assume is the mouth is actually the nose.
    Good work ;D
  • Rosilien - 08/02/2010
  • Her eyes are very low on her face. I like the style, and i think this picture would benefit from moving the eyes up towards the top of the head, making her forehead seem less tall. Other than that, i love the blush and sweater!
 
 

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