- by LoveTheStorm |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 07/10/2010 |
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- Title: Tsune
- Artist: LoveTheStorm
- Description: Ok, I spent an hour on this on paint.NET and I know I can make the grass better but didn't really try, I did try on the person though and please only constructive criticism, I have been drawing on the pc a lot in the past 2 years and progressed a lot since the first drawing. But I know I'm no where near professional so tips would be nice :)
- Date: 07/10/2010
- Tags: tsunematunikocharacterpaintnethappy
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ipoopdust - 07/14/2010
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an hour? wow.
Okay here's a few tips from me, since I'm a digital artist =)
The hairline is a little too far from the brows. Neck should be a teeny bit smaller, if you're trying to get an "Anime" feel out of it..
torso is alittle big. there's really no femininity to it. Waistline should be smaller and even out at the hips. There's really no detail in it. No shading. The eyes would be better with detailing.
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- LoveTheStorm - 07/10/2010
- thx of course i wont flame ya u didnt flame me did u?, im a bit more mature since my last entry lol. thanks and im a little better with a laptop pc so thats what i used and the hair is supposedto be flung back er something but i didnt really define it too well
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- EvilKooKies1134 - 07/10/2010
- well i can already say ur better then mi. i pretty much have given up drawing comp ever since i got a laptop and stopped using a mouse. u should work on ur proportions more i think the neck is a little wide or the arms are too this the hair is a little wierd the top of the hair on the forehead isn't rele tht flat and yea plz dont flame me.
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- LoveTheStorm - 07/10/2010
- actually her name is Suna
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